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What are you complaining about? This chapter came out wayyyyyyyyyyyyy cool! LOL. It\'s way early in the morning and I\'m sitting here reviewing awesome fics... *drools and swears she\'ll go to bed sometime before dawn*
Tootles!
~Kate~ ;o) *Also known as the Immortal Queen of Absolute Insomnia*

You take such twists with the story, and yet it all works! Fantastic. I\'m really loving this one!

This is such od sod story, I cannot wait for your next update!!

This is such a good story, I cannot wait for your next update!!

I really like this story, but I think you should change the summary. I didn\'t read it for a while because I thought it was going to be a draco/hermione story. you have a very good writing style and I like the fact that you\'re taking it slow between the two of them. It makes the reader feel more involved in the story. I\'d like to see more up close interaction with severus and hermione. for instance the narative scene in the dungeon where hermione is picking his brain about everything and nothing, well, it would have been nice to have been witness to a sample of it through choice dialogue.d ald also like to see you avoid the always asked question: why did he become a deatheater? please don\'t use it. your story is very good so far and I really can\'t wait for you to update again but er..I guess it\'s a pet peeve of mine since everyone tends to use it and come up with the same answer:P

looking forward to reading more. I really liked the ending to the last chapter. i felt like although it was contrived by severus to carry the plan forward, there was still a sensuality about him whispering in her ear. I can\'t wait to see what he teaches her for the ball. my sniffer is detecting some lemon scented freshness:P

great job on the story so far and I hope my review provides the type of feedback you were looking for:)
Jess

I really like how this fan fic was written and how everything is playing out. I am thourally enjoying it. I can just hardly wait untill more of it comes out

Wonderful. You really do write well; but my favorite thing about your story is Snape. The way you write Snape, brooding eyes, lean hungry body, and a voice like sin... the possibilities are really endless. Hermione is feisty enough to keep up with him, and there is a prevalent sexual tension between the two. Will it be expounded upon in chapter 9?

I love it. I can\'t wait for more. I like snarky bastard Snape with bitchy Hermione. *G*

Great but once again i thought that it said in your summary that Snape caomes down hard on Hermione and she takes it out on Malfoy??????? I hope she takes it out on him soon but by the looks of your A/N Snape is gunna take it out on her first (lol) anywho im still iesteested and im sure you have the PLOT all worked out iur hur head so continue and post soon!!!!!

w33t! I can\'t wait! This is a really great fic!