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I like your plot!! Draco and Snape are soooo hot!! update! ^_^

I gathered that it probably wasn\'t Hermione with Draco shortly into the scene. It was cool that you had it play out that way with Draco\'s mind being clouded by lust. It also added nicely in to the plot. You were right; it was necessary. However, it was also good writing, in my humble opinion. Secondly, I usually have problems reading stories that are consistently grammatically incorrect or insensible. You seem to be writing a lot all at once (which we all have a tendency to do) and probably fast too (darn fingers can\'t keep up with thoughts sometimes), yet despite any shortcomings I am drawn to the story enough to dismiss any heavy sentences or grammar flubs. So, don\'t worry about proofing it ad nauseum, because if the story is good and believable, your readers will still read on. Like me.

Oh such interesting developments and twists! So good! I\'m addicted! I\'ll be waiting happily for the next update!

aH AHAH evil cliffy EVIL I am on pins and needles waiting well not literally but you know I cant wait I cant i lovest your fic please update soon and please dont feel sheepish i am sure no matter how dirty you think you are writing there are a million more people out there writing dirtier so no worries we wont think your a dirty porno fic write unless you want us to ^___^
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kagomeRain

OMG OMG I really CAN\"T wait for your next chapters please post asap but I can wait patience is a vitrue (trying to be vituious and..... failing) ahhhh I am so in love with your story beyond all belief I love it I really hope you continue your story and I love the way you right I am in love with your story yes I am IN LOVE bwhahaha I can reread your story like a million times but i do hope you post soon

MUCH love and support
Live long and propser
Peace Out
Loyal story fan
KagomeRain

ooooooooooooo... i can\'t WAIT to see what happend next!! I don\'t know about you,... but i consider thet lit line to be a cliffy ^_^ and personally, i\'m more than glad to read the \'mistakes\' if you choose to update sooner... =hehehehe... great job with the story.. it\'s so well written and i check it every day for updates =) thanks for keeping up w/it! <3, ~Leigh~

Thank you thank you for not abandoning this story! I am still loving it! I only found part 1 was part 2 supposed to be up as well? Part 3 is the one that you are proofing right? Anyway I think you are fretting way way too much! Just post the updates! We will forgive you if the story isn\'t perfect! Honest! We love your writing too much! ;c)

This is an excellent chapter. I am so happy to see you have updated because you are an excellent writer and I am looking forward to more and soon!

Zoe! I am begging you please sweetie update!!!! I have been hangin\' forever it feels like! Your loyal readers are dying here!!!

Augh - A cliff hanger and then nothing - please, please, post something. We have to know how your Severus handles this little boy touching his \"mistress.\"