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for The Lion\'s Serpent

by Zoe

person nesscafe
schedule September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Zoe, darling! STOP IT!!! Your writing is wonderful! Honest! I would not read and review if it sucked! And I would not get all excited when you update if your work wasn\'t worth reading! Sometimes we can be our own worst critic! And seriously you are over analysing your work honey \'cause it\'s really fantastic as it is. I understand high standards, but really I think your work on TLS is better then J.K. did on OoTP! That book was good don\'t get me wrong, but it went on and on before it was interesting and well... It just wasn\'t her bestk. k. However, your little fic here is just wonderful. It\'s interesting, well writen, the plot is moving along. Really, you are fretting for nothing. And the authors notes don\'t bother me. I usually skip them if I don\'t want to read them. So, in short if you are worrying this much maybe you should get a beta so that you don\'t get so worked up over your writing. A beta will be honest and tell you if you need to fix here or there. I personally think your story is wonderful just the way it is. I look forward to your next update and if you still don\'t trust your work email me, we need tve ave a chat!

Hugs,
Ness
person Darkfaith
schedule September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Damn cliffhangers!! Means you have to update even faster!
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GAH!! WRITE MORE!!
person kuky
schedule August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
cliff!! update soon!! Nice one!
person Honey B
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person elementaldeity
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HI, i enjoy this story it like the way it flows and has good balance. i check everyday for updates.
person revel_in_me
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is great...can\'t wait for more :)
cheers
person nesscafe
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!! I was wondering when you were going to cough up this chapter! I am so loving your story! It\'s really wonderful! And of course you left us w/ yet another cliffy! You are so very cruel! I hope you aren\'t going to sit on the next part as long as you did this one! Come on you know you want to post it!
person FlorenceWeasleySnape
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! great chapter! Upload ASAP
person Krista
schedule August 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps getting better and better!

I can\'t wait for the ball!