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Alright!! You can\'t not say who this is! I must know who character number two is! You can\'t make your readers cry about a character\'s death and then not explain who it is! Please, give some sort of clue! From what book did you find reference of his relationship to Severus? If you could leave some sort of clue at the end of this story that would be really, really, really appreciated. Please!

Woah. Wait a minute, there! I am _so_ lost as to who the other was. Care to email me and tell me? *gets on her hands and knees and begs* I don\'t think I\'ll ever figure it out, otherwise. I\'ve gone over several Death Eaters, and none of the ones I think of seem right. So, would you, please, let me in on your secret? I promise not to let it out.
Well, anyway, this was a fabulous story. I enjoyed every last bit of it. Except for the whole \"I can\'t figure out who this is, dammit\" thing. At least I could figure out places. ^^;
As for the song in the first chapter...Grrrr....You got it stuck in my head and I don\'t know where the CD is currently. *curses her luck* I shall just have to go borrow it from my dad. >> If he\'ll let me. I grew up on Pink Floyd, so it\'s something I\'ll never get sick of.
I loved your story!
Anata

ok i like. i love. hell this is the best storie i have read since the books. you are an amazing writer. i think the wourld schould bow at your feet and kiss the ground you walk on. maybe you should become a wr wit with your own characters instead of borrowing others. i\'m sure you couyld make it in this world. congrats my lady.could you e-mail me to let me know you got this..... im not sure if people actualy read these reviews. any way you deserve 8 thumbs way up.

Dammit! Who the hell is it? I first thought it was Barty Crouch Jr., but he went to Azkaban. Then I thought maybe it was Regulus Black, but I thought he was much younger than Snape and the Marauders, plus he was killed by Voldie. In the 4th book, Voldie states he\'s missing 6 Deatheaters - 3 dead (which I assume, one of these is your character), 1 too afraid to return-Kakaroff, one who has left forever-Severus, and Barty Crouch Jr. Then I thought, what about all the names Kakaroff gives. Has to be either Antonin Dolohov, Evan Rosier, Travers, McKinnons, Mulciber or Rookwood. MY ANSWER IS: Evan Rosier..?, since he is dead - chose to fight, as Moody states. Am I right???? ^_^

I wanted to leave my email address, so if my guess is correct (or not), hopefully you will have mercy and fess up! Thanks!

I just have to say that i usually don\'t like reading Severus ficut out once i had figured out that he played a starring role in this fic, there was no possible way that i could stop, it was a wonderful story that provided an excellent background for the way snape is now, it made me cry. And after the second chapter when i figured out it was snape, i stopped trying to figure out who the second one was, so if you could please tell me, it would be great, and i\'d really appreciate it. Thank you very much, and grand kudos to you on an excellent story, BRAVO!!!

-Mary

OOOOOO I know who it is!!!! I will only give one away though...Severus!!!!!! TEE HEE!!!!

i knew that it was gonna be snape.. I could tell but the no touching and stanstand offishness.... that was really good though... to bad he had to die.=(

I adore this story, thank you very much. Found you by accident, and glad I did. I was thinking at first maybe Oliver and Percy. But chapter two dismissed that idea. Then I figured Severus and someone, possibly Lucius. But the character seems so *un-Malfoy*. It actually seems like Ron, almost. The next two chapters I was just lost. I\'m still lost on the pairing....*obviously* they\'re Death Eaters. Erm....there\'s so many random ones to choose from. I mean, *obviously* we have Severus....I suppose I\'ll have to wait then. Enjoyed this though, the way you built the tension. Can\'t wait for the rescue!

An oh......what a review! Don\'t worry, I\'ve seen the movie, and no, it as nothing to do with your fic. Oh, wait, yes it does. The words \'and\' \'is\' and possibly \'the\' occur in both. :-)

Anyway, judging from the way it\'s constructed, methinks you pissed someone off. Perhaps the author of a *very* poorly written smut fic who can\'t take critisism? (Which is how I found you, BTW) Off to read more of your lovely fics!

YOu should stick only with the Harry Potter characters and not bring in outside characters and please redo your plot and what\'s with the mystery people?
Outside of hogwarts is boring.
This would have promise and you should check over with a beta reader if possible.
I also noticed that some of the plot is taken from the movie In love and war, well it doesn\'t work very well in a Harry Potter fic and you should stick with the premise of Hogwarts and the characters.