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for Havoc of the Opera

by Roman

person Sarryn
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was so utterly delicious. The kiss was...exquisite. I am in raptures over this chapter. Brilliant!
person Anata
schedule September 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*hyperventilates* What...in the world...happened...there?!?! *tries to calm herself*fails miserably* That was pure eviiiil!!!!!!!!! *gasps*gasps* Breathe in...breathe out...breathe in....breathe out....
Okay, except for the fact that you are a -demon-, this was FABULOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Add about a million more exclamation points, btw.)
THE Kiss was...well, for lack of a few better words, sexy/hotallyally wonderful. What\'s wrong with Severus that he pushed Harry away? *pouts* Well, except for the fact that they\'re student and teacher, of course...*has a theory on that, but also thinks it\'s probably wrong* ?ssenisub retaE htaeD no tuo elihw dekcatta/depar saw eh ebyaM
Not quite sure why I wrote that in \"code\", especially since it\'s not very hard to figure out anyway. Think the Mirror of Erised.
Anyway, I loved the detail and passion you put into this; it was/is absolutely CAPTIVATING. Poor Hermione; she\'s in deep. Hope things work out for her. Not so much as I hope things work out for our dear, immoral couple, though. *hums happily whilst remembering THE Kiss and conveniently forgetting how this chapter ended*
Still in love with this and can\'t wait for more!!!!!
Anata
PS- *dances* I talked to my director, and she\'s considering me as assistant stage manager!! Woohoo! I don\'t have to be in this musical! I can wait for the next one!!! *re *really didn\'t want to try out for the musical* Yay!!!!!
person Sly
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
On with it.

Gotta say - you\'re just too damn good. And if you knew what you were talking about, you\'d be dangerous! By the way, I\'d be delighted to see your toture chambers *grins* Do you have any specific times that you update, or is it just random?

Love, Sly
person Excel
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man, I just finished reading all these chapters and I\'m completely hooked. Harry and Snape?! Well, what ever floats your boat. ^_^ Personally love Hermiwithwith Draco and hope that hook up happens.
person Movie
schedule September 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, dear, you think THIS is the worst chapter?! Have you read all the fiften others porforming - oh, let me see! - NO kissing, NO shagging and LONG long time nicknamed \'Bibble-like\' dialogs? I don\'t know what exactly made me think this chappie was actually nice... and no way it could have something to do with your waving of THE KISS in the next! Naah!

The strangest idea of Hermione being pregnant crossed my mind, and the child being Snape\'s would give it a special flavour ;) Ah, well, it must be the heat wave messing up with my one neuron!!

Cya
Movie
person mikochef22
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A steamy Harry/Severus dream and you didn\'t let us in on it?... how rude!!! You did say one more chapter right?, we get some good ol\' fashon snogging going on in the next one? please?.... or as my baby nephew says pwitty pwwweeeesssseeee?? oh im so excited, I can\'t wait... and no you won\'t have to call in the healer.... i think ill make it now ... thanks for the quick update, another as soon as the muse allows... Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
person CrowSkyler
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Eee, yet another great chapter. Of course! ^_~ Keep up the smashing work - dunno how you\'re managing to do such big chapters in so little a time. All the more commendable. And, the Harry/Sev... yess. *veg* Making Sev jealousld bld be fun, I agree with a previous reviewer... Heheh. But, your story, and what a story it is. */blatant praise*
person chantalmalfoy
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok... I just get getting more and more lost... But I am looking forwrd to THE kiss... even though I
can\'t figure out where it will come from, since neither one of them has made a move torward the other...
Oh, well.
person Sarryn
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Do not be so hard on yourself. I highly enjoyed this chapter. Your writing is fresh and crispite ite a treat for the mind.
person Anata
schedule September 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Meh. Too tired and lazy to sign in right now. -_-;;;
*cackles madly* Well, Harry\'s decided! Now all we need is Snape and The Situation. *waits*waits more*whistles* La la la...*whistles more as she waits*
Anyway, I\'m glad I read this. It put me in a good mood after my audition for a musical. *dies* It went well until I got to hear another girl try out with my song. *cries* Damn favoritism in directors!! (not always, just now.