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So here it is, the much awaited confrontationrry rry confesses his love. And Snap blows him off (kinda). And I loved it. I know I hate angst but I loved this chapter. It was great. And wow... Harry\'s breakdown was perfect, trust me it does happen that way sometimes (been there done that). Especially when you\'re that young, so I really have to say bravo on the break down. If the next chapter is this good then I\'m not going to complain about the lack of smut. (Which is a first for me :P). I knew you were talented, but you\'ve out done yourself. I hope I see more of this. Actually you\'ve inspired me... gawd I can\'t beleive I\'ve started a fic. My first fic woohoo. You\'re quite a muse but don\'t come after me if my writing\'s terrible, amatuer here, can\'t compare.

Okay, I think...no I know that was one of the best chapters so far. Severus loves Harry, I know it, now all that needs to be done is for him to admit it to himself, well maybe he has done that already, so he just needs to admit it to Harry. How How many more chapters before then? I get so excited when I an an update for this.... kinda sad really, oh well, im hooked, please update soon, Great chapter! Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>

This is so good of a story. I want to keep reviewing although I have hardly anything useful to say. Except I love this story and it is a lot since I don\'t usually like Harry/Snape pairing..l, hl, have been changing my view lately as I\'ve been reading many good stories about them. This is the best, going to my fav list.

Thanks for the frequent updates! Awh, that one made me cry.

*whines pitifully* This was so sad! *sniffl*whines more* Poor Harry AND poor Severus! They are so lost and misguided in their relationship!!!
You did a beautiful job of the conversation; the emotions were heartfelt and heartbreaking. I\'m trying so hard not to cryht nht now. *sniffl* I feel so bad for them. *wipes her eyes* I MISS SIRIUS!!! *sobs*
*takes several deep breaths* Okay. I think I can get over it now. I hope.
Anyway, they ARE going to get together still, RIGHT?!?! *glares warning daggers* Get it? Got it? Good. *tackles Roman* You updated! Yay! This chapter was so angstily enjoyable! I love angst (along with fluff, and basically everything, as long as it\'s well done). Severus\' last line very nearly DID make me cry. It could be sue, ue, though, couldn\'t it? *sighs* How depressing.
Anata

You\'re the best. Today I had someone sit besides me as I read the chapter, and were called wierd, an idiot, arsehole, yucky and so on and so forth. So please write some more... NOW!

I\'ll just have to find a scanner then you\'ll get the art... It\'s not funny when one can\'t find a scanner.

You have every right to be proud of this chapter. It was masterfully wrought in my humble opinion. I quite enjoyed partaking of every word. I thank you most sincerely for the pleasurable experience.

aww... poor Harry. He really isn\'t looking for a father... he\'s just looking for love.
Why won\'t Severus love him? I\'m sad now...

Oh great! so sweet man so angsty too. love it. man i about cired as harry was. then snape just held him tell he stopped it was great.

Miki

Woa!

Beautiful story, I had alwais loved TPotO, but since I started reading your story I\'m humming the songs all the time... Lucky my cat seems to like it ;). Sure, Ginny is helping Draco with his relationship with Hermione, isn\'t it? Too bad no one thinked of this, Dean was so jealous... I hope everything will turn allright to them, I love when Ginny is not one cheesy girl, and you make her alot more interesting. And congratulations: you ma vea very interesting and believable Severus... Really, I don\'t imagine him mooning over no one, and beeing all sentimental etc... But you make him a solid character, oh how I love him!!! Do you think Harry would share (blink, blink)?
I like Hermione too, poor thing. Hope Harry and her will say each other WHO every one likes, they are beginning to tap on my nervs... Not the writing, they seem very realistic and all, but I really don\'t like insecure people. If you like someone, go for it! Go, Harry, go! Go, Hermione, go! Go Draco... Ahem. Love the little ferret too, and I agree totally with Hermione on that: Harry and Draco will be incredible together. But they are a little too obvious as a pairing... And everyone tends to write about them as if everithing was solved between them just by love. Sorry, I never believed in \"all you need is love\", love tends to make things even more difficult...
One of the things I like the most in your fic is that it doesn\'t come to that: Snape looks Harry in the eye... Draco looks Hermione in the eye... Ron looks... Neville? No, he is with Pansy XD... uh, whoever in the eye... And all ends with a big kiss and everyone is happy!!! Bleurgh. Human relationship are difficult and complicated, not just soapy love moments. So please, stay as you are and make as many chapters as you want, but don\'t make an easy end. Ah, and I agree with you: Ron and Hermione could NEVER be a couple. He is tomplemple-minded to match her. Hope Rowling don\'t make that mistake, grrrrr...

Please, write more. Feed me!!! Have I said that I love your fic? More, more, moreeeee!!!!

Fan kisses,
Lady Debar