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for Havoc of the Opera

by Roman

person Samantha
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely great story!! And I know never to take seriously clues revealed in fan fictions, but I can\'t help but hate Hermione in your fic but then again, I have always hated the character. She is never truthful with Harry while she makes him tell her everything, he has barely any secrets from her while she has a multitude starting with her illness and going to Snape. Ron is more then forthcoming with Harry then Hermione has ever been. I also started to notice she gets sick when Harry is feeling particularly low, depressed, numb or angry but mostly when he is feeling an emotion strongly. Does her illness have something to do with Harry, is Hermione an empath and getting sickm him his negative feelings about her etc? Keep up the writing, and please if you could don\'t make Hermione perfect, I have read too many fan fics where she turns into a gorgeous babe, thats always right, is never wrong and knows whats best for people. That isn\'t realistic, don\'t go down that path please!!! Again, great story, I love the way you write Harry and Ron in this, their mannerisms are exactly like that of the book.
person Sly
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m personally gonna kill Hermione. And you, I don\'t like cliffhangers... Please let it be Malfoy she\'s having a crush on, please. When did you get to hate me so much? *sniffles*

How did your spelling get so bad, huh? It\'s not like that in the other chapters. Need a b-reader?

Love, Sly

PS: If you don\'t straight this darn thing out I\'m gonna hang you in puplic and put your knickers on the menu... *glares daggers*
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I doubt that Hermione has a thing for Snape, but she has no businesses spending the night in a professor\'s quarters, wearing his robe. That goes too far. I am seriously irritated by her in this fic, and I\'m hoping that she dies from whatever she\'s \"suffering\" from. What a hooch.
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story
person dwv
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Now that\'s a nasty cliff hanger.

You\'re absolutely evil!!! ;)

I can\'t wait to read more, the story is simply fantastic. The way you keep us all in the dark about the different relationships makes it all the more exciting to read.
person Slant
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'v said it once, I\'ll say it again. You are evil incarnate. You\'re terrible to torture us so (even if it is such sweet torture). Poor Harry. (Yes, i do have a thing for him, don\'t we all?) Damn, if i wasn\'t addicted before, i certainly am now. *Demands a speedy update* Oh! Next chapter\'s the kiss isn\'t it? *bounces* BTW: I love that you love it. *grins manically* I wrote down the next chapter during one of my lecture\'s but I\'m to lazy to type it up I\' I\'ll probably do it soon though.
person Yami Rebeckah
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Rebeckah: *twitches* KILL FUCKING HERMIONE!!!! GAHH!!!! THIS IS KILLING ME!!!! NEED....SMUT!!!!
Yami: *slaps her* CALM DOWN!
Rebeckah: ers ers in a corner*
Yami: What she\'s trying to say is: Get Hermione OUT OF THERE. It\'s bugging me too lol. Great fic by the way, and please, updates ASAP!

person mikochef22
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh no oh no, how much can Harry take? I don\'t think this is going to be good!! I know that Harry and Severus are going to end up together and I know that Hermoine and Severus have nothing going on, but Harry dosn\'t and this is so not good. Harry needs to wash his mouth, with bleach, Pansy ewwwwww!!! Please update soon. Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
person alex
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THat slut! stupid Hermione... please update soon.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule October 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hermione spent the night in Snape\'s quarters?
If this kind of stuff keeps happening Harry and Sev. are never going to get
together! aarrgghh!!!!!
Please put the next chapter up soon... I don\'t know how much more anticipation
I can take.