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for Havoc of the Opera

by Roman

person penny
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH wow! More ly sly soon please? That was an evil evil cliffy!
person crudedly
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* and you\'re stopping here?? I 't b't believe you...
Anyway, it\'s wonderful! I actually listened to the Phantom of the Opera yesterday again after a long time, just because of your story. (at least it\'s good to know i still can sing along with them, even if i sing terrible)
I liked the play \'Moulin Rouge\' and how you wrote it, you know, with all the interaction with Harry\'s and Ses\' s\' Dialogue. It was a bit hard to follow, though, if you don\'t know \'Moulin Rouge\' line by line.
I hope you will update soon, i still haven\'t give up hope Severus won\'t die after all (sorry, but Harry as Phantom? nope, doesn\'t fit.)
person Anata
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Took you long enough. ^-^ But it was definitely worth the wait, I say. But, before I get to the overall chapter, I wanted to zero in on something: the part where Severus leaves.
That was so amazing. It was so painful and sad, yet loving at the same time. I wanted to cry. I could feel my eyes stinging and watering and I can still feel the emotions of the two. I still want to cry. The beauty of this scene was almost overpowering in its intensity. I loved it.
Okay, now that I got that off of my chest, I think I should get onward with the rest of the review. What. Does. Voldemort. Think. He\'s. Doing?! Bastard! He should be shot. --; And Harry! He may have a concussion! I hope that he, and Severus, are alright.
It...-was- Severus....right? --;;;
Anyway, thanks for the WONDERFUL chapter and I can\'t wait until you te ate again.
Anata
person Sailor Aurora
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ACCCKK!!! noooooo!! nota cliffhanger, you evil woman! Are you sure you\'re not an slyerin?

^_^;; anyway.. I really loved the latest chapter... I liked how the lines of the moulin Rougue seemed to work well with what was going on... and how theywent ballstic in practing thier play, lol.

But... moment harry hit the ground, I was like: NOOOOO!!

you better update soon, lest you don\'t want to give me a heart attack.. :p
^_~ pretty please?
person Deirdre Riordan
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gaaaaaah! Wonderful, beautiful. You really have a way with words. I loved all the back-and-forth between the play and reality. I\'m biting my nails.
person chantalmalfoy
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, don\'t let Severus die. Please, let that be someone else in his vi. Oh. Oh, poor Harry.
My heart can\'t take any more. This chapter was so sad. It made me cry.
person Miki
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it\'s Sev who he saw when he was flying wasn\'t it.. the guy on the ground at wand point in pain... he has to be fine tho and came back to harry ust ust has too. it would kill harry if he didn\'t. I hope harry is ok tho.. he fell off his broom man i wonder what draco was thinking as he saw that happend... it would freak me out i can tell you that much. one menote be playing and the next your partner is holding his scar in pain and falling off it in a dead faint. hermione is not going to be happy at all... man.. very very very very good chapter. i hope they get back together.. they so need a happy ending.. and sev realeedseeds to stop being a prat at times. You kick so much ass Roman!

Miki
person LustyMuse
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARGH

You\'re evil!

MOOOORE!

*threatens you with Neville trying to sing \"Memory\" from Cats*
person Roman
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
L-Sama\'s review of Chapter 30, edited for space (sorry, love):

AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! How can you stop it there!!
You are pure evil!! EEEEEVVVVVVIIIIIIIIILLLLLLL!!!!!

*grabs leg and cries* PLEASE update soon....*pets thigh* I\'ll love you if you do..... (j/k)

person Sarryn
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go on vacation and look at all the delicious updating! I\'ll compliment your style if I desire to, la. It\'s not only the style that keeps drawing me back, love, it\'s also the content! Wonderful plot and so well thought out. In all points quite excellently wrought.