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person MoD
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooohhhh I like the sequel! It is just getting do juicy
person Lyria
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! Naughty Sev. Planning a night with Polyjuice, no doubt.

That should be interesting.

I really like this. Sexy and lustful without being cheap. You can see the real affection between Hermione and Sirius and Remus. It will be interesting to see what happens with Sev.

Very nice. :)
person Corazon
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG! POLYJUICE POTION!!!!!!!!!!!

OH! But just make sure Hermione finds out it
is Severus.

I know I am assuming here, but what hte hell!

Hugs,
Corazon
person deedee
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is Sooooo good:) Sirus is possessive. Isn\'t he? I noticed it in the first story. But I love him. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. Please write soon.
person Sher
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well done, Andrian! Could Hermione have it any better?

Sev is a naughty, naughty boy! Voyeurism? Polyjuice? Evidently, he has a side that needs awakening as well, though unlike Hermione, he\'s taken matters into his own hands...so to speak. I hope he reveals himself to Hermione although I wouldn\'t want to be him when Sirius finds out, because unless our possessive Animagus has a personality transplant in the next chapter (nooo...), he\'ll make Snape wish that the Death Eaters had gotten to him first!

*insert evil laugh here*.
person Lynda
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! What a deliciously sexy story. :-) I am going to hunt down Part I.
person madamshark
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist at the end of chapter 2, cannot wait to read more.
person QueenC
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*Swallows nervously* Uh-oh. Severus is being naauuughty. hehe

This was great, hun. Can\'t wait to read the next part. And, don\'t worry...whatever people you may have lost by throwing Severus into the mix, you\'re sure to get quite a few new readers because of him. lol

Great job!

*hugs*
QueenC
person kat
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story, hermione is one lucky girl. anyways, keep on writiing!
person Luna Riddle
schedule July 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ask! no, why did you stop there?! it was getting soo good! but what happened to remus?