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person Nell
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! 2 chapters! I feel lucky! (or I just missed the updates..lol!)

Anyways.. mmm polyjuice.. he he he! That Snape! I feel sorry for him. Poor thing, now he can\'t complain. He\'s got what he wanted. Smart!

Now, now.. you said something about a threesome.. Is Remus back? eh? eh? is he back? please? yes? yes? I can\'t imagine Snape and Sirius togethe the the same time.. BUT considering your talent with the quill, if you write it I\'ll believe it. Just write it. But please please.. don\'t leave Remus out. He\'s got a terrible transformation and the best medecin is a great dose of \'healing shagging\', give it to him. Hell, if it doesn\'t fit with what you have in mind, could you write a nice cookie about it and send it to me? please? I\'ll be forever grateful and Remus will be redeemed. (and shagged! eeeeek!)

Cheers! Blessed be your quill!:D
person Red Writing Hood
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh My...

I can never get enough of Severus. And this story is giving it to me in droves...more please! I need much more.

RWH
person mikochef22
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HA! oh my god that was so fucking great!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love that so much, i can\'t stop the smile on my face. I laughed so hard when... wait wait I want to get this right.....this happend.....*Then it struck him. He looked around the room, suddenly feeling embarrassed as his hand reached down inside the boxers. His sensitive fingers explored the area and a sly smile crossed his face.
person dianna
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GOOD story i like it alot. you are a very good writer
person Astrid
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Are you absolutly mad? You can\'t just stop here! Write a sequel and update, update, update!!!!! And HURRY!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!
Oh, and don\'t forget Remus. It\'s only half the fun without him. He definitely has now something to do to get even with Sirius again. *hint, hint*
And before I forget, I know what you have in mind with Snape, you evil woman. I\'ll just say Polyjuice Potion, am I right? And I\'m sure everyone of us will see over the fact that this potion takes a month or so to brew, if you really hurry with updating. ;-)
person Morwen Snape
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow I love this story and part one sooooo much. I must say though I don\'t usually read threesomes, but I think if I find another one as well written as this I will have to. You have to have a Severus/Hermoine/Remus pleeease it is a fantasy of mine. (Subbing me for Hermione, of course)

Waiting for the next chapter,
Morwen Snape
person HPfreak18
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Severus is up to no good, but of course you did an excellent job on this chapter, update and conetinue soon
person Nell
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, definitely, Severus Snape will have his little bite of Hermione.-lol! Oh I
person Smiley
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Keep them coming =) . Can\'t waite for the next.
person em
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is sooo good!!
i cant wait to see what severus will do although i have a pretty good idea
can u email me at lollylips3@hotmail.com when u update this fantastic story!