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person madilayn
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very nice follow up. Good to see Hermione rising to the challenge!
person ~Dracaena~
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yes finally Sev got some action .. gosh and I loved the \"Got you on that one, Black\"-line .. sure huge nose huge other ahem parts *wicked grin* I\'m so grateful you put our favorite potions master in this one. Can\'t wait for more .. you simply rock my world with your outstanding smut stories. *bows and worships Andrian*
person jez
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is great!! please write more soon.
person HPfreak18
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! Good job, Aha! Severus got caught and now gets detention!! CAn\'t wait for more!!
person ChevyBaby
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself* Phew...Another hot chapter :o) With my favourite pairing HG/SS :o)
person Ana Liddrel
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
its kinda weird, but i like, i like! Want to see more smut!!!!! Like the first.

Keep going!!!
person ghost_master
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
jeez hermoine is getting it on.
person Morwen Snape
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
SQUEEE! (oh God, did I just squee?) I can\'t wait!!

Great chapter. Silly Severus not watching his time! As soon as you said/wrote he filled more of her than she remembered I was like, \"Oh no!! How long have they been going at it?\" Great, I lurved it!!

Really excited about next chappie,
~Morwen Snape
person Linis
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow wow wow.... I canna wait untill this is updated can ya let me know when it is so i can read more... I hope remus gets to pay a visit as well... Dark haired guys are okay but a blond is more passionate don\'t ya think?
person Tatiana
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful but you need to update quick
before the lightening comes!!!!!!

Hugs,
Corazon