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wheres part 3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,and so on !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Are you going to write more? huh? huh? Are you? Write more? Please? Pretty please?

Wow that was great I loved it and that sex scene was really hot too. I like the way you wrote this, keep up the great work

You did an amazing job on this. You managed to rush through Harry's school years without making it seem rushed. Good job chap.

This is great you should write a sequel to it. Such as when Harry gradgraduated.

Hecate DeMort

I enjoy your stories but you need to finish this one fast i want to know what happens.

It was a quite interesting story. However, I find the language a bit plain in places. When I am reading a story- be it fanfiction or actual novel- I enjoy language that paints clear images in my mind. There were words that were overused to a fault, and that failed to paint a clear image in my mind. Although the plot line was excellent, the story was not as excellent as I believe it could be if the language had been more descriptive.

As I like to say, the language was digestable but certainly not palatable.

I love this fic!!! They make a cute couple!!

I love it!!!! Wonderful, just wonderful!!!! Is there any more coming? If so, It would be an even better story!

I loved this story very much but I did have one question if they been together for 2 years wouldn\'t Harry be 14 and not 15 because they got together when he was 12 so that would make him 14 or have they been together for 3 years. I wasn\'t sure so I thought I would ask. Most stories I seor gor grammer so I don\'t finish the story and this was the firt time I saw not poor grammer but a few errors and I was able to finish it so this was a very good story. Even with a few errors I don\'t always finish them but not with yours you keep us right there in the action and gave us a good story to listen to.
Rene