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for Shaking under the sheets

by Angelicus

person harryhollow
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* poor harry!! I Hope harry gets vernon back for what he did to harry!!
person WTF!!!!!!!!!
schedule June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude thats just fucking sick ur disgusting ih my gawd the man is so fat ewwwwwwwwwwwwwww nasty god just fucking wrong what in all holy things could have ever posseed u 2 write that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person DarknessSparkles
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh that is so sad and horrible! ...*sniff* Poor Harry! I can\'t say I enjoyed it very much; it was too awful! Still ... it got me thinking. \"Regular\" Vernon seems like a nice man now! Hehe ... So I thank you for that!
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
the set up is bad, the writing with the bouncing tenses rags. We have enough violence agt out our children in this world for someone to write this. don\'t do this again.
person Saria
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well...er...I do love rape fics. A lot. Although, Harry/Vernon isn\'t one of my more liked, this fic was rather...enjoyable
person HellFenix
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
interesting idea... Harry/ Uncle Vernon? hmm...
but i think i should tell you: your tense in the fic is terrible, makes reading a pain in hte \'rump\'.
and no, this is not a flame- well not really...
person Beth Mitchell
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the most disturbing thing I have ever seen. I couldn\'t get past the first paragraph, because I had to run to the bathroom and vomit.
person Anna
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe anyone could even write something like this. Yuck.