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June 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully morbid
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October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just want to let you know how wonderfully moving this fanfiction(if you can even call it fiction) is. The story is so realistic, I swear that you could be writing about me in my darker days of life. It is so wonderful the way the writing flows from one topic to the next so smoothly, even though the sentance fragments are so diffrent from one another. And in your last paragraph the line \"She scolds herself for not putting on shoes.\" is so wonderful in reminding everyone (or atleast myself) that even in the seconds before our death how dis-satasfied we are with ourselves. But I applaude you for such a moving ending...
\"The snow is stinging the bottom of her feet as she steps up onto the ledge.
She looks out over the white ground.
It is prettye ade admits. But not half as beautiful as darkness.
And with that thought, she flies.\"
Absolutly wonderful... so wonderfully subtile, the letting go is just so..perfectly captured in that one line. I am without better words to describe it. It is a writers dream to find one phrase like that, and you have many within this one story. I complement you on your writing style. I am forever envious.
_Emily
\"The snow is stinging the bottom of her feet as she steps up onto the ledge.
She looks out over the white ground.
It is prettye ade admits. But not half as beautiful as darkness.
And with that thought, she flies.\"
Absolutly wonderful... so wonderfully subtile, the letting go is just so..perfectly captured in that one line. I am without better words to describe it. It is a writers dream to find one phrase like that, and you have many within this one story. I complement you on your writing style. I am forever envious.
_Emily