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for Skinny Dipping

by Icarus

schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A brilliant depiction of a first time; all the fumbling, elbows in the wrong places, not knowing what to say, simple misunderstandings, the not entirely understood pleasure....
That was beautiful.
person Hexia
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! This was so... I can\'t discibe it!!! So fantastic, so senzitive, so ...real!!!
I wasn\'t very fond of Percy, but now I just wanna hold him and huge him and... make love to him (though his gay :)
All of a sudden I remenber a night on the beach with a guy when I was 14...
AND you made me totally forget about dinner - now I\'m in need for love-makeing instead of food!!
Shame on you (NOT!!!!)!
Please! More like this!

Lots and lots of love
Hexia
person Hexia
schedule October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PS/ After reading yous comment:
You\'re so right!! You can be awkward even 10 years after loosing your virginity! It\'s easer \'cus you kind of know the game, but still!
I sometimes miss the \"first-time\" fumbling - it was a thrill just to touch naked skin under a t-shirt...
::fond memories::
>smiling sigh<

Yours
Hexia
person Icarus
schedule September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can always tell the people who\'ve never had sex.

They\'re the ones who are either bummed out that a sex scene is not \'romantic\' - it should be stars, fireworks and candlelight. Or they believe that somehow, magically, the people who have had are are instantly comfortable together and have overcome through sex alone, all awkwardness.
person Nicole
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it to a point, but then it seemed as if the boys were too uncomfortable with one another too often. Did they or did they not have sex?
person HellFenix
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
skinny dipping?
wierd pairing?
what more could a person ask for?
nice fic by the way.~_^
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oHHHH! That was excellent! I enjoyed watching that side of Percy =-) You did a wonderful job at capturing the awkwardness between a first time Harry and a not very confident Percy - perfect!

Great Work! Is there more?
Karena Elizabeth
person Takaro
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey cool, thats a new couple ^_^ I liked it. hehe...pond scum...*giggles*