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July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story with good in depth to the characters. I especially like how you are portraying Severus. I hope to see the rest published here...however could I beg a request. Is it possible to seperate the paragraphs and dialouge? My eyes arent what they use to be.
Other than that (which is only technical and has nothing to do with the content) it is very promising. Good job
Other than that (which is only technical and has nothing to do with the content) it is very promising. Good job
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I\'ll be kind. Good job you\'re doing here. (smirk)
No really, you\'re doing fine as far as I\'ve read it.
I know I have to read the next chapter before reading your updates, but
please hurry up with the next part(s).
Love Maddy
No really, you\'re doing fine as far as I\'ve read it.
I know I have to read the next chapter before reading your updates, but
please hurry up with the next part(s).
Love Maddy
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, now that I\'ve read the second chapter, you have to update very quick...
Even if you don\'t get much reviews from other readers, please do it for me then.
I do wish to know how it ends between Snape and Duncan.
It\'s getting somewhere, that\'s a fact.
Love Maddy
Even if you don\'t get much reviews from other readers, please do it for me then.
I do wish to know how it ends between Snape and Duncan.
It\'s getting somewhere, that\'s a fact.
Love Maddy