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September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! I love this chapter. When Draco & Hermione break, they sure do it.
The description of the effects of the breaking were fantastic. Very detailed and comprehensive. I missed a first person POV of Draco & Hermione in the \"rainbow of light\" -- can we get some of that at the begining of next chapter?? Please?!?
I just keep enjoying this story. It is fabulous!
The description of the effects of the breaking were fantastic. Very detailed and comprehensive. I missed a first person POV of Draco & Hermione in the \"rainbow of light\" -- can we get some of that at the begining of next chapter?? Please?!?
I just keep enjoying this story. It is fabulous!
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September 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO!!! Excellent chapter!
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September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a great story! I hope to see the rest of it real soon. Keep up the great work.
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September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ch 32:
Those were exquisite sex scenes! One whole chapter of tasteful smut! Furious and rampant lovemaking RULES!
Those were exquisite sex scenes! One whole chapter of tasteful smut! Furious and rampant lovemaking RULES!
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September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sighs*
i\'m not even a harry potter fan *ducks flying objects* but i started reading this at the urging of a friend and have been so caught up with it you make me want to read the HP books...even thoughi know there won\'t be any draco & hermoine in it like you\'ve written.
just wanted to drop a note and say...fabulous job! utterly fabulous.
cannot wait for more!
--rae
i\'m not even a harry potter fan *ducks flying objects* but i started reading this at the urging of a friend and have been so caught up with it you make me want to read the HP books...even thoughi know there won\'t be any draco & hermoine in it like you\'ve written.
just wanted to drop a note and say...fabulous job! utterly fabulous.
cannot wait for more!
--rae
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September 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I just want to point out a tiny mistake you made in ch. 33.
You wrote, \'Watching Harry and Hermione and Ron and Lavender and Neville and Parvati coo all over each other did nothing to help her disposition and Hermione was nearing her breaking point.\'
It should be \'Watching Harry and Ginny...\' just wanted to point it out just in case no one else has already. And just for the record, youory ory is wonderful! (I\'m sure you get that alot, but I had to remind you again!) And I love how you use fancy words, well, atleast they are fancy to me! :D
You wrote, \'Watching Harry and Hermione and Ron and Lavender and Neville and Parvati coo all over each other did nothing to help her disposition and Hermione was nearing her breaking point.\'
It should be \'Watching Harry and Ginny...\' just wanted to point it out just in case no one else has already. And just for the record, youory ory is wonderful! (I\'m sure you get that alot, but I had to remind you again!) And I love how you use fancy words, well, atleast they are fancy to me! :D
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August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Two more absolutely brilliant chapters to devour. What can I say, you are truly great. I shall be waiting for the next update.
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August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THat was really cool! So now everyone knows about Draco and Hermione!?!?!?!? YES! Update!!!!
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August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! *lots and LOTS of happy tears!!!* post soon post soon!!!!