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hey i love your story it has lots of great things in it and very detialed. i have a question was loin and the serpent part 2 the last chapter of the story? if its not when are u going to update?
~Samm

Wow!!! That\'s all I can say. I really do think your a genius! I wouldn\'t have been able to write anything like your story. Well I hope you post more soon. I\"ll be waiting lol.

Brava! Brava! That was a wonderful battle scene, didn\'t even think that you would put it during the commencement dance. Your story is always fantastic and draws me in and away from all the things I should be doing! Thanks! :> Hopefully you can find time to keep up the amazing work, I don\'t think I could stand it if you left this unfinished! Anyways just wanted to congratulate you and maybe encourage you to get into writing mode! Cheers for now! -luxy

Really good story (I\'m sure u\'ve heard those words alot ;). One thing I\'d like to point out, actually two; is it just me or do you seem to make a parody on Dumbledore\'s twinkling eyes?? hmmm...that\'s what I thought,lol. Another is, and I don\'t mean to insult or be rude, but you really seem to have the whole \"fairy tale\" thing goin\' down. What I mean is that, well, everything seems to just be too... unrealistic... you might wanna tone that down a bit. Like when Draco made ALL the newspapers burst into flames? I don\'t think that\'s really possible, even if it is in a magic wizarding world, it\'s just not realistic. There\'s alot of other things in there that just make you think \"damn! everything seems to be going their way!\" type of scenarios. Ok, enough of my nagging, don\'t mind me, I\'m just a nagaholic who just happens to have a cold and on meds for the time being. Keep up the wonderful work and I\'ll keep nagging!

WAUW!!!!
I had to like read it twice before coping it for real!!
Please don\'t end it here - I totally agree with the other reviewers: We want to know what happens next!!!!!

I love your smut >dirty smile< - your drama >oh the drama! Oh the humanity!<
- your descripting of the clothing >who doesn\'t want to be princess for a day???<
- the action >bloody brilliant!!<
- the undertones of SOMETHING with Snape... What happend to Prof. Vector by the way?? What IS it with him and .???.??? And mayby Millicient is a \"dark horse in the running\" (not for the prom, since it\'s kind of over, but anyway...*LOL*) ...

I am looking every day for more to come - even though I respect that you have a life outside fanfiction... - maybe ... :)

Anyways ... LOVE IT, LOVE IT, LOVE IT!!!

Love to you as always!!
Hexia

PS/ I didn\'t get to read your first version of the 2. part (weekends - familyvisit ...), so I don\'t know what I missed, but the 2. part now lying here is fan-f*....-tastic!

Whoa!
What a great battle scene!
I really liked the culmination to the Voldemort section of the plot. Too bad Hermione\'s dress was ruined and she & Draco didn\'t get a chance to dance more ;P
I look forward to reading more.
Bring on the Smut!!

Great story! I hope you write what happens to them all before you finish this story. Keep up the wonderful writing.

I know you ended this with \"Victory!\" and Riddle being dead bu-ut... the Draco and Hermione-ness is not done yet! The ring *needs* to be clarified and IkindafeelbadforRonniesoumpleasetellusifhe\'sokay. >.> <.<

Your dance descriptions far far exceeded any expectiations on my behalf and I think her dress was quite nice. ;) More of a cat fight between Draco and Veela-boy would\'ve been niut Iut I suppose he is above that. ::sniff:: The rock scene, however, was... delightful. ::grins:: kin-kay. And of course, those Ravenclaws can decorate [that\'s about all we do, aside from make mad crazy love in the odd corners of the library, but shh about the last part.] and the description for that was really cool. The whole \"dancing in an orb of night\" concept is really inatinative, a bit hard to wrap my head around but when I try visualg itg it the effect is awesome.

pleasesayit\'snotoveryet, the Fat Lady hasn\'t sung yet! just kidding.

Oh My GOD! There are no words to describe how much I enjoyed the new chapters. You are truly the best fic writer ever in mmblemble opinion. Please do continue.

Well, I liked it the way it was before, but I liked it either way. To me, this fic is more about Hermione than Draco, so I understand why it was the way it was before hand. I thought it was brilliant, both parts.