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by gammiepie

person Hexia
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh god!!! How am I going to be able to go on when this story ends????????
*sobs* It is as always fantastic and I love it!!!
I just pray now that the last chapter will be so long that you\'ll have to break it into two maybe three parts in order to post it :D
As much as I don\'t want it to end I still hope you up date soon.
And I hope we\'ll have a little wedding-scene???? Or maybe a double wedding???
And that Ron and Millie get together? And that there is someone for dear Snape???
And that you explain the Rose Mark on Snape??? And who\'ll replace Dumbledore - or did you already tell that (Oh goody - an excuse to read over :) ??? And...
Hmmm... Are you absolutely sure there only one chapter left??????
:)
Love and hugs
Hexia
person Draco_Fan
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Once again dear, a beautifully written chapter. Applause is needed here... *Stands up clapping*. Update soon dear. No rush of course. I\'m sure the next chapter will be just as exquisite!
person Peeves
schedule November 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This latest chapter was simply brilliant!!! I LOVED the NEWT transfigurations that you came up with, they were very creative. Also your love scene was fabulous!! So many \"smut\" scenes are simply the same old thing written over and over, this was so original! There is so much more room for creativity in a love scene when you are working with wizardkind... The scene in the Great Hall with the \"see-food\" was hilarious! I absolutely could not stop laughing and the image wouldn\'t leave my mind. My hubby finally had to come over and find out what had me gasping. :) I am happy to say that Mr. Harry-Potter-is-for-kids got a good chuckle out of it. I will be disappointed when this story comes to an end...hehe, but there lwaylways the anticipation of a new fic from you!

(((raspberry)))
Peeves
person deedee
schedule November 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can see it now, they\'re going to be engaged forever and never make it to the alter. What\'s with Snape? Is he attracted to Hermione?

I have a love triangle plot if you want to use it. Snape HermHermione will be working on a potion (because she\'s his assistant) and the smell impairs their judgement. They end up have sex (just the once) and she becomes pregnant. She wants to get rid of it, but Snape begs her to keep it, because it\'s probably his only chance to have a child. He promises to never tell Draco and be \"uncle Snape\". Hermione and Draco finally get married because they want to get it done before the baby is born. Then the rest is up to yor I r I could come up with some ideas. It\'s really late and my mind is mush. Just ignore me:)

Write more!
person MsLessa
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
And you said that there wasn\'t the fluff in this chapter!n I loved it.... the lemon drop willow tree... the drunken wake at the hut... Snape butting in and Hermioneckincking him back a peg... Millie and Ron... the mental convo... Snape\'s reacton. You are just to good woman and it makes me very sorry to see this coming to a close but I do believe you mentioned that there might be some sort of sequel down the road maybe, possibly? Either way I look forward to whatever else you may write next.

Blessed Be,
Lessa
person Hanna Delacour
schedule November 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this last chapter. It was sad and fun at the same time. I had wondered about the ring, and now it all comes out. I really like how you portray Snape, so few capture the real undertones of the man, but you do perfectly. Can\'t wait for the final chapters. Hope to have the honor to read more soon. ~Hanna
person Jules
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is such a fabulous story that just realizing that it is nearing the end saddens me. I love your writing style and your Draco & Hermione are intelligent & strong yet vunerable characters. This chapter, where everyone has to re-find their equilibrium, is a wonderful study and a snapshort look at all the characters. Everyone has something to negotiate, whether it is big or small. The details of Albus\'s tree, Minerva\'s dress, the Malfoy engagement ring, Millicent\'s relationship with Hagrid are just wonderful attention to detail and what make this story come alive.
I look forward to the resolution of this story and hope to read more of your work!
person deblovesdragon
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic Fic!!! I have read the whole 38 chapters in the last 2 days. Bloody brilliant.
I can\'t wait to see how the whole thing ends.
I read you a/n\'s stating that this will NOT have a happy ending. As the author, I realize that you must go where your muse leads you. But are you REALLY sure that there can\'t be a happy ending. PLEASE!!!
I anxiously await your last (3?) chapters.
person Fiery Slut
schedule November 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was very romantic! Ie Sne Snape
person Draco_Fan
schedule November 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GRRRRRRRRRRR! Update soon please?!?!?!??