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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9~
Really Great Story!! I have really enjoyed reading your story today! You are a very talented writer! Easy to read! Great plot and story line! Not just sex, sex, sex ... but, the sex is GREAT! You have really captured their emotions true to form! I like Draco trying to be evil in the beginning and slowing coming around to respect Hermione for her intellect, her magical superiority and her sexual prowess. I like how you are keeping Hermione a \"strong\" witch over Draco\'s advances and not becoming a \"pansy\".
I\'m glad to see that you have included a lot of *magic* into this story! With their magic abilities of being both Mage and being able to become invisible is a \"good thing\" when trying to find a \"neutral territory\"! Sweet little love butterflies. Veracitas, Engorgio, Alohomora, Reducio, Sonorus, Polyjuice Potion, Gratificare, Invisibilis, Revelatio, ... all great use of magic spells to enhance this story!
Your humour really comes through your writing too! \"... when he sent a quill over to her to write back and forth, she picked it up and snapped it in half.\" Snape in a skirt! \"Please don\'t let Millicent and Goyle procreate. Those would be the ugliest children on the planet.\" \"I had to pull a Bond to get it back.\"
And the sexual one liners are AWESOME! \"You... started ... this. Now finish it.\" \"Well, then. Seduce me.\" \"You may not be able to do this, but I am.\" \"Someone\'s in a naughty mood. Hmmm... you really think?\"
Keep up the great work and looking forward to more chapters! Thanks for updating so fast and so muc onc once!
** The Wishful Witch **
Really Great Story!! I have really enjoyed reading your story today! You are a very talented writer! Easy to read! Great plot and story line! Not just sex, sex, sex ... but, the sex is GREAT! You have really captured their emotions true to form! I like Draco trying to be evil in the beginning and slowing coming around to respect Hermione for her intellect, her magical superiority and her sexual prowess. I like how you are keeping Hermione a \"strong\" witch over Draco\'s advances and not becoming a \"pansy\".
I\'m glad to see that you have included a lot of *magic* into this story! With their magic abilities of being both Mage and being able to become invisible is a \"good thing\" when trying to find a \"neutral territory\"! Sweet little love butterflies. Veracitas, Engorgio, Alohomora, Reducio, Sonorus, Polyjuice Potion, Gratificare, Invisibilis, Revelatio, ... all great use of magic spells to enhance this story!
Your humour really comes through your writing too! \"... when he sent a quill over to her to write back and forth, she picked it up and snapped it in half.\" Snape in a skirt! \"Please don\'t let Millicent and Goyle procreate. Those would be the ugliest children on the planet.\" \"I had to pull a Bond to get it back.\"
And the sexual one liners are AWESOME! \"You... started ... this. Now finish it.\" \"Well, then. Seduce me.\" \"You may not be able to do this, but I am.\" \"Someone\'s in a naughty mood. Hmmm... you really think?\"
Keep up the great work and looking forward to more chapters! Thanks for updating so fast and so muc onc once!
** The Wishful Witch **
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July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh...very nice. This looks to be another great D/Hr fic with an interesting angle. Good job! More soon please!
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July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on this very well written and sexy fic!
I have an obsession w/ Draco/Hermione because of the underlying sexual tension between them!
Your sex scenes got me really hot and bothered
I have an obsession w/ Draco/Hermione because of the underlying sexual tension between them!
Your sex scenes got me really hot and bothered
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July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
neat! more please. =)
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July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YOU HAD 2 LEAVE IT THERE!! nooooo!! please!! please!! update i really wanna know wat happends next ur really a talented author.... heheh!! that\'s all buhbye!!
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July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good so far--I\'m very anxious to see what happens next!
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July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very good indeed. Nicely done and written!
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July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot! I really like your style of writing and I can\'t wait... I hope you update soon! Draco and Hermione are the best together and you keep the characters in their original characterization... They\'re not different! Update soon.. PLEASE!