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duck pjs rock!
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Just brillantly beautiful. That is all I can say. Your work is tastefully done and pays much attention to the minute details a lot of authors today think do not need to be described. It was an exlilerating story to read and I love how the story flows so smoothly throughout the many chapters. You kept in mind your plot and did well with keeping all of the characters in character. You also made sure to shine on every quality the character had allowing the reader to relate whatever particular personailty you described. Some of the scenes you wrote were so in-depth and so full of emotion that I felt it resounding inside of me. (ex. Hermione\'s bout with depression). I commend you on a story well written. I look forward to read anything else written by you. Thank you for sharing this work of pure excellence.

Bravo! Is all that can be said .I loved every minute of your story ! From beginning to end . KUDOS!

A very heartfelt and well-deserved round of applause I give to you. Thank you so much for writing this! I absolutely loved it. There\'s obviously so much more I can say about this truly wonderful story but I\'ve just spent ALL day reading it (as I couldn\'t put it down, so to speak) and I will just say SPLENDID!

hi! Just wanted to say that I totally loved your story! My favorite story are ones that have plots and takes me forever to read.
Your story was so great and organized, on a scale of one to ten, you get a 20! :)

I understand that this has been completed for some time, but I have just stumbled on it today, and spent the entire day, and dare I say night, reading it. There are brilliant character arcs for your protagonists and the storyline is extremely detailed and intricate and ambitious. You pulled it off beautifully. Angst, passion, erotica, heartache, fear, and joy abound throughout the pages. Thank you for the obvious hurculean effort to bring the story to fruition. Were it a book, I\'d have plonked my 15.00 on the table and kept it for future re-readings. As it is, I\'ve marked it as a favorite to return to, time and again for some lovely well turned phrases, and a beautiful exploration of Draco and Hermione as they come of age.

I just had to tell you that I enjoyed your story so much that I stayed up until 6:30 in the morning to finish it just because I had to know what was going to happen. Now that I have finished This Subdues FIre I am finaly going to go to be, but I have this feeling that as soon as I get up I will be reading the sequel. To me the sign of a really good book is one that you have difficulties in putting down and in complete and total honesty I can equate this piece of fiction that you have written right up there with some of my most favorite books by some of my most favorite authors and there have only been a few other fan fiction authors I have found like this, and i read quite a lot of fan fiction, so, my hat is off to you and in reward (if you care for one) I give you a brand-spaning new shiny golden halo. I wear one myself, although for different reasons, and mine is a bit crooked, wear yours in whatever way you wish.

Absolutly fan-fucking-tastic!!! Excuse my French but it\'s the only way to describe this story. I loved every single bit of it. Chapter 33, with the declaration of the realtionship was superb, the battle was intense and heart-felt (loved Hermione\'s dress for the dance by the way). Basically it was just great. One thing though, just nit-picking: Gryffindor have only won the house cup once so far, in PoA. However, as the rest of the story was by far one of the best I\'ve ever read I shall not dwell on that. Anyway, as I was saying I loved it; it was well written and....well, excellent. Not much else I can say. Ooh, I was right about Dumbledore though (yay team me!) and I really enjoyed the idea of the lemon tree. I congratulate you greatly on your writing talents and thank you for writing this story. Slytherin Secret.

Well I\'ve got about nine Chapters to go, I think, but yet again they will have to wait. Although if they are half as good as the ones I\'ve read so far I\'ll be very happy indeed. This is one of the best fanfics I\'ve read and I love it. I love the ancestor linking and the idea of the roses markings; it\'s all very original and interesting. I\'ll read more soon as I can\'t wait to find out Snape\'s link to Hemrione or to find out who dies (I\'m betting on Snape or Dumbledore). I\'ll review again once I\'ve finished reading, Slytherin Secret.

I love this story so much. I\'ve managed up to Chp15 so far and thought I should review as there\'s still a way to go and it seemed like a good place to let you know what i think. To quote a certain, red headed Gryffindor: \"It\'s bloody brilliant!\"

It\'s well written and so emotive I can feel it all happening. Hermione\'s feelings towards her parents death are amazingly written, as is her and Draco\'s passion for each other. I love the idea of the wandless magic (Any story with that in is always popular with me).

I can\'t wait to read the rest of it and see what will happen between The Order and Voldie, Hermione and Ron (as he seems to have a large soft spot verging on love for her), and especially Draco and Hermione, who are so good together.

However, like so many of life\'s other great things that will have to wait as I need to sleep. lol.

I\'ll review once I\'ve read more.

Slytherin Secret.