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by gammiepie

person milkshake
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is th best story here please write more!!!!!!!!! i will be waiting for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person deedee
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That chapter was just raw emotion. It was so tragically romantic. I loved it:) Personally, I would not forgive Draco. But when you\'re in love you do stupid things. Draco and Hermione\'s relationship is so true to the saying \"You don\'t choose who you love. It just happens.\". Thank you for the update notice. Please write more soon:)
person Pammy
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WAHHHHHHHHH! I actually got teary eyed! This story is amazing and this chapter blew me away. I feel so bad for Hermione. I\'m eagerly awaiting the next update.
person Zahrah
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God!!!!!

I just finished reading the last Chapter and I must say this is the best Fanfic I\'ve ever read. Your a really good writer!
But I hope Hermione gets out of her dark thoughts soon and makes something to take revenge on Voldemort! : )
Respect, the story isd really good written. I look further to the next chapter.
I hope you could email me when you update????

-------PLEASE; PLEASE; PLEASE-------

Go on writing like this. : ) Zahrah
person luxy
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Good on you! KEEP GOING!!! you really have to keep this story going, i\'m sure you will and don\'t let me pressure you! *hehhehheh* really, really, really good, i love hermione as and emotionnally fuckwitted individual! (gotta love Bridget Jones) and Draco/Hermione stories are top in my mind! anyways, keep on writing your wonderful stories and i\'ll be checking on this one periodically! cheers!
person BamsDeadChick
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is so, soooo beautiful. You\an aan awesome writer. I\'m addicted!
person deedee
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story!!! The D/Hr scenes are great. I\'m glad you kept Draco as a bastard even after he started liking Hermione. On the other hand, I think Ron could be nicer to her. Now that she has hit the bottom(I hope), is there a chance for Draco to worm his way back into her life? I can\'t wait for more. Please write soon:)
person BT
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story. Yes, you must hit bottom before you can climb back up and the way you have described Hermione\'s descent is most excellent. However, in one chapter you have Snape gleeful that Neville isn\'t in his Potions class anymore and then you have Hermione smirking at Neville\'s cauldron melting. It is a little distracting but easily fixable.

Keep up the great work and update soon, I am very interested in what will happen next.
person Croft
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I seem to recall you writing something about Hermione having to hit rock bottom - hopefully it won\'t get more rock bottom than this, and she will start to feel better. As for Draco - here\'s hoping that things will get at least a bit better for him as well, although nothing points in that direction yet. Still a marvellous story.
person Pammy
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YES! Ron ing ing Hermione out was a nice touch. Maybe this will straighten her out...hopefully. Great story. I love fics with intense drama. Update soon. PLEASE!