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for This Subdued Fire

by gammiepie

person AbsolutShelley@gmx.de
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Appause for the author, it
person Jez
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful and sad, very sad. I love your story and i can\'t wait until you write more.
person Ashley
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this just keeps getting better and better
person VampireHunter278
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The ending was sooooo friggen sad!!!! I cried through the part when people started crying.....and if Severus is crying its gotta be something really sad....
but if you do post another chapter please E-mail me. along with the story title...thanx....
P.S. That was the most saddest chapter I\'ve read in my life through all the other fanfics I\'ve read.
person Cat
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your writing! Write more!!!

*Hinthint*I really want Draco and Hermione to get back together...*Hinthint*

Heehee =)

<3

-Cat-
person jenn
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*speechless from the tears coursing down her face*

how do you do it? how you put so much emotion into your writing? how do you make the characterization so real that these creatures are tangible and frighteningly involved? how the hell do you do it?
person Kel
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A really long chapter, yay! I\'m glad she\'s finally coming back up. Hope to see more soon. Good job, as always. :)
person Kiristeen
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! REally an incredible story. Every single character spot on, yet evolving and growing. I can see each and every main character here becoming the ones you portray in your beautiful wrg. g. Alternately, the mischief, the heat, the hate, grief, and anall all roll off the page and hit straight into my heart. I can easily say that I\'ve *never* read a better Harry Potter story. You\'ve turned a pretty one dimensional character (Draco) and fleshed him out into one with depth and a feeling of reality.

You\'ve even made Snape human, *without* de-snapifying him, and that\'s not an easy thing to do. lol

I eagerly await more of this gripping tale.


Kiri
person Croft
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'rtairtainly glad to know, that things will start to get better from now on - there\'s a limit to how much angst I can taeveneven when it\'s this well-written. Not that I\'m expecting it to be fluffy from now on - not at all - but I do prefer itn thn the characters aren\'t suicidal. Yet another superb chapter, and Hermione\'s sorrow certainly transcends - you even had me shedding a tear or two. And not for the first time, either.
person Zephyr
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh-my-God! Your story is just awesome! There are very few Fics that bring me even close to tears but yours has done it! Poor Hermione. Please Update Soon. You also have the makings of a great writer and a wonderful storyteller.