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for This Subdued Fire

by gammiepie

person jules
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous!
I love the interweaving of the mythology [?] in with the story. You should consider writing an essay for the Fiction Alley or Contra Veritas websites re: the research you have done.
In terms of enjoying this fic, it keeps getting better. I love the time and care you have taken in developing this story. The pacing is just right. The characterizations continue to be spot on. The story is original and gripping.
I look froward to your updates!
person gracemis
schedule August 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the information on the background for this fic, very interesting. I was had a bit of difficulty with this story line, but I am really impressed with the depth of your character development and the time you have taken to get all the characters to where they are now. All the drug and self abuse that Hermoine put herself through was intense and strange. But i could see how she got there and now that she has moved on, it makes her a much richer and flawed human. thanks for sharing this fic with everyone!
person Draco_Fan
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a little unexpected.... But it\'s cool.. I hope you update soon!
person Rebecca
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Still brilliant. Awesome job. <3
person blossom
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very well written...update soon!
person jenn
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you will finish this story?! I think it is one of the best DM/HG on this site. I have been checking back everyday to see if you have added another chapter! You have done a great job at keeping Draco true to the character. Too many fic\'s have Draco being WAY to fluffy. You seem to have found the right combination of agressivness and heart to make him believable. Please add more chapters soon...I am dying of the suspence!
person Cat
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
As always, I <3 your story and hope to see the next chapter soon =)
person Cat
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Pfft... my review didn\'t work right... ?

Anyway, I said: -As always I <3 your story, and hope to see the next chapter up soon.-

Or something of the sort.
person Cat
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This review thing is really making me mad and I don\'t know why its cutting off my review...

Ok, sorry for posting 3 times, I hope this works.

I said:

As always I love your story and hope to see the next chapter up soon.
person TalaKidanya
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Take your time! I can be patient. *shifts* Okay, maybe not. But I will be^
I^
I don\'t see Hermione as an Mary-Sue, you\'re simply exploring parts of her personality that could be brought out according to the circumstances, and I admire you for that. It takes a certain amount of flexibility that not a lot of people had, so kudos to you!
Good luck on the completion of the next chapter! And thank you for your review! You\'re right, I can see Rita Skeeter saying Whoremione. *laughs* Although it was Draco that called her that in the story Id.
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Again, I can\'t wait to read what you have in store. Congrats on a fab story!
~*~ Tala