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for This Subdued Fire

by gammiepie

person Jules
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
Great chapter. I love the intricate twists and turns this story has taken.
I also appreciate the the humor (Dumbledore!Slytherin!).
I can\'t wait to read more, the TLC with which you have constructed this is amazing. The progress and trials of Draco & Hermione have grown them so much.
Thanks so much for writing!
person Jez
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! Write more soon please!
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is the absolute best dm/hg I\'ve read in a while. I just discovered it last week and read through it in an instant. Can\'t wait to see what comes next.
person LeAnn
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow you really know how to leave me in suspense! LOL I hope there is more to come. If so post soon.
person Menolly
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Biantiant research hun!! I\'m really enjoying the story, especially with all the background information you give.
person Hexia
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am SO in love with this story!! THANK U for up dating! I can\'t wait for more to come!!
Your style is SO fantastic!!
You could be JK under cover, it\'s so good!

Please write more soon!

Lots and lots of love
Hexia
person Croft
schedule August 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that was lovely. Hermione inviting Draco up to her room after all that neutral territory was just... wow. And Hermione throwing a tantrum was fabu as as well: \"Do you always have to be such a secret keeping little snot?!\" Priceless.
person LeAnn
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!! You keep the charactors atittudes so much to the book. I just loved. Are you going to do some more or maybe do a sequel as to what happens to Draco and Hermione? I must say you are a very talented writter. I couldn\'t have written it quite that weGoodGood job and keep it up.
person s
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
mm, fascinating! the lessons in english history, i mean. references, parallels, allusions... make this fic stand out in wonderful ways. you\'ve a uni unique elements to the story (mages, rose marks, etc) but you\'ve done it believably and thoroughly, without leaving holes. thumbs up etc! keep on writing.
person Campy Capybara
schedule August 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Facinating indeed. You have just turned the linear plotline into one that delve into the history of Hogwarts and perhaps the foundation of the wizarding world. The research you put into the story makes the story more compelling. Good work!