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for This Subdued Fire

by gammiepie

person alina290
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am not sure if you still log in here to check out our stories. I hope you do. I also hope you will start to post your stories related to DH at Hawthorn and Vine, it is a site that is only for Draco and Hermione just like Colored Grey was. It would be nice to hear from you, lizalya13 @ yahoo.com

Liz
person kurtcouper
schedule August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this was marvelous! Draco is such an enigma and I love the range of emotions he gave. But my favorite was in the mid chapters, with the angst. All good stories must have good teary eyed angst. When the part when Hermione cried and everone fallowed suit, so did I. You write with such feeling that it was hard not to. I was dissapointed that Hermione never really got a chance to tell Draco everything she did. I expected a sad, yet possive blonde hair Slytherin. But never the less, this is gorgeous. Please continue writing other wonderful stories. <3KC
person Jill
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Without doubt the best Harry Potter fic I have ever come across!
person sbkar
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay... I started this fic about 9 last night, it\'s almost 8 in the morning... Blame the internet for going down; I wouldn\'t go to bed until I finished it!!! This is -- sincerely, from my hearth -- one of the best Hermione/Draco fanfictions I have been privileged to read!!!! Well, it\'s the depth you drew out of the characters, and the mixture of canon and non-canon ideas that made the whole thing so enthralling!!!

I just had to commend you on the story!!! I hope I\'m lucky enough to find more of your work!!!
person Yoshima
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWEE lovely ending. you know i read this whole thing in less than 2 days?? and it was damn good.
person Abbey
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Magnificent. Superbly magnificent. I couldn\'t stop reading it. I\'m off to read the sequel now (thank god you\'re writing one!), so I just wanted to say thanks for the great story.
person Foxtail
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Delicious - leaves me wanting more.
person Kim
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! I LOVE A HAPPY ENDING!! I was SOOOO worried! Sometimes there are some brilliant stories out there and then they go and ruin it with heartache and tragedy at the end. I\'m so relieved you didn\'t go that route! Well done!!! Well, I\'m off to see if you have any other brilliant fics!!

I have a fic started, if you\'re interested.

http://www.astronomytower.org/authorLinks/Hpwylie/The_Final_Year/

Enjoy!

Kim
person Kim
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far!! Brilliant! You\'ve actually made me belive that Draco and Hermione could end up together! That\'s saying something!!!

There was one teensy problem with Chapter 10 - when you describe Malfoy patroling (the time when he insults the Fat Lady), at first you have him paired up with Millicent and then the it switches to Pansy.

Just thought you should know! Well, I\'m on to Chapter 11!

Kim
person kappamaki
schedule March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, I loved it! I still have tears running down my eyes...