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for Harry Finally Has a Fun Summer

by Jamesmortis

person jack
schedule July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
good keep going.
person lordanur
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was great harry the pimp
person Fengxian(not signed in)
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious! I can even imagine the old bitch begging for it!
person Jessica Leah
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was...weird. Definitely not believable, though. nee needs more work...
person Veelacity
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well, your spelling and grammar are terrible.

And you\'ve never actually had sex, have you? This is a classic example of a smut-writing attempt by someone who\'s learned all they know from reading very bad porn.

Word of advice: find better porn to read. Don\'t try to write your own yet. You\'re not ready.