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Excellent. I loved this chapter because Garden of Eden was romantic but this was much more rawer and a change of pace. The fact they did it on the desk and in his classroom, that\'s good. A spanking wouldn\'t have been bad either. Muah. Great chapter.

AHAHAHA! Norah Topps.... fabulous! its kind of a two sided thing though...Tonks can change her appearance and be a student, but poor Sev doesnt know when its her! but still great! so glad that you updated i was having Stress Relief withdraw! i hear thoughts of a prequel??? i say if you can think it then do it! but after you finish alleviating the stress put upon tonks and sev!! hehe.

You go Tonks! Great scene. She should cme around more often to harass Severus in class. Pretty priceless when Dumbledore walked in. Very nice waffy moments.But where is cranky, jealous Siruis to fight with Snape and moon over Tonks? ^^

I would have reviewed this wonderful chapter earlier, but I just read it. I have been on vacation for the last week. I can\'t wait for the next one.

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Keep writing! :)

Beautiful, beautiful chapter. Snape swept her off her feet and oh was it romantic. It was as lemony as a lemon cream pie and I loved it!! Thanks and hope you update soon.

Wow, I am loving this story. My friend Ida sent me the link and I have not been able to stop reading it. Please update soon! This is great!

That chapter should carry a health warning it was soo sexy, I haven\'t cooled down yet!!!! I tell you when he uttered the lines \"That\'s better. I want you to watch-I want you to see what you do to me.\", Tonks wasn\'t the only one who shivered. You have created one amazingly sensual Snape, he is sex on a stick. Thanks for the update and keep up the fantastic writing...more, more, I\'m still not satisfied:0)

Hilarious moment when everyone walked in on Tonks and Severus. Role reversal, huh? And Ron saying \"I\'ve gone blind\" was cute. Now everyone\'s properly traumatized. And the lemon...Good stuff. ^_~

yeah i see your point on the Weasley\'s. anyways, fantasic chapter, its good to have a fluffy fairy tale chapter in all the craziness that is the OotP. I\"m glad to hear that you are going to try to keep it through the entire book. I cant wait to see how you portray JKR\'s characters following her storyline, but making up your own as you go along. oh and i tried the yahoo thing, but i seem to always have trouble getting to any of the fanfiction sites on yahoo. if you come up with anythelseelse, or know how i can get in let me know, really interested. again, fantastic chapter!

I really like the premise of your story. Snape and Tonks are both tough on themselves and this story suits their characters.

So, are they going to forgive themselves and each other enough to have a future? I hope so.

It\'d be cool to see a sequel to this story - something that included their reactions to the events later in the book, especially where Tonks ended up...

Keep up the excellent writing!