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for Seed

by hefox

person xhedwigx
schedule November 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's very good, like the bit where the kitty purred at her new name
person Essi
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummmm... Why is part two in the first chapter? Is there any place one could possibly read the part one. The story seems really interesting, but I have to say that I\'m a bit confused what\'s happening when I can\'t read the first part.
person shadow
schedule March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, I don\'t get this story. It\'s confusing and weird. Not too sure what are you getting at. Everything seems in a unorderly faction. Are you trying to make it into some kind of mental, psychosis. Did something that happened to harry and it is unclear to harry and enma itself. Everything is disturbing and harry haven\'t a clue to what\'s really going on. Either didn\'t believe it or made everything up within his mind or in shock of short. If you can try to explain it better in another form or use different ways to describe what u really mean than maybe it will be a bit more clear. Some times it\'s hard to describe things into words the way u want it to be. well, keep working on it.
person K. Riddle
schedule August 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Um...this story makes absolutely no sense. It\'s like you left stuff out or something. It\'s very confusing and personally, by chapter 3, I wanted to bang my head against my computer desk. This has the potential to be a great story...if you retype it...
person armitage
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your story is confusing
person She-Who-Will-Not-Be-Named
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Um...no offense, your story is rather confusing...boring...and by the beginning of chapter three, makes absolutely no sense if it did at all. If you reposted this story you really need to try again...I\'ve definatly readter.ter...

person Erica
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heehee...I love kittens! :) I am one...meow...Snape hee hee I LOVE IT!
person Erica aka DracozKittenNC17
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know I love this fic...and as always...I WANT MORE!!!
person Danine
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was good, I feel like I\'m stoned reading it, but I liked it a lot, hehe.