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for Evil Never Looked So Good

by kittycat

person Cherie Sanchez
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
Ireallyt like it so far its good i\'d like to see more detail in the next few chapters. It was a little disappointing that her mark said property of Slytherin and not property of Draco Malfoy im not to crazy about anybody but draco touching Hermione. But i guess you have a reason.i think it be better if her first night with him was willing ya know cuz she is a virgin and he (Draco) hopefully will be her first but i dont want him to be that mean to her.Cuz i think it would be a great idea for her to actually fall in love with him and he with her.and no one but one or the other could be with eachother even though he still is lke a slave master over her. Well i guess thats all for now. Hurry up with the next chapter i cant wait. toodles =)

~Cherie
person rikku
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love that story... it\'s great. Draco is evil and that suits him perfect ;) Poor Hermione.. *gg* (maybe someday she will enjoy it ;)) Please hurry up, i want read the next chapter... ^^

is there only Hermione/Draco or maybe a little bit of Lucius/Hermione [or Voldemort/Hermione? *gg*] (and i miss a little bit the word \"mudblood\" in the story and that Voldemort \"accept\" her so easy.. but let\'s see what happen in the other chapters ^^\"\")

Rikku

P.s.: sry for my bad english ;)
person Puppy Blu
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh God....Oh God.....OH GOD.......this is just...great......*sigh*....perfect...i LOVED this story.....but now i want more....grant me more...please?.....thankz!ahahahah......i wanna see....what....happened.....................~PuppyBlu~ *Catch A Falling Star,and put it in your po...m...make a wish...*