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for Heart of Darkness and Light

by Lynne

person ladydeathfaerie
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was absolutely brilliant, my dear. you\'ve brought tears to my eyes. thank you so much for the characterization of both severus and ariah. i can honestly say i don\'t think there are two better matched souls. a man buried in the middle of death and destruction and a third of a triple goddess known for her roll in war, battle, death, and destruction. blessed be
person ladydeathfaerie
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
brava, my dear. keep up the good work!
person Arien
schedule July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful job. I can picture so clearly in my mind\'s eye the dichotomy that is Snape. Tortured, sometimes cruel, uncertain, fragile, yet needy and deserving of some kind of happiness. Keep on writing chapters, my friend.
person ladydeathfaerie
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i find this story very intriguing. i have a certain passion for the potions master, and i like that you\'ve portrayed him as both the hateful professor and a fragile human who believes he is unworthy of happiness and love. a very realistic trait. i\'m interested to see where you go from here.