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June 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OMG dude.
In all honesty, I read this because I absolutely loved \"Brownie Batter\" and when Ravenclawgrrl mentioned you wrore a prequel, I was in. I had no idea that it was going to be THIS good.
I LOVE the way you captured the \"first time\" aspect - the mention of how every woman would think the first time would go over. But, sometimes it doesn\'t turn out that way. Glad it didn\'t turn out that way for Hermione in this fic!
Well written, and you made my jaw drop. That takes a LOT. VERY cool!
Great storyline, well done, and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Well done!
In all honesty, I read this because I absolutely loved \"Brownie Batter\" and when Ravenclawgrrl mentioned you wrore a prequel, I was in. I had no idea that it was going to be THIS good.
I LOVE the way you captured the \"first time\" aspect - the mention of how every woman would think the first time would go over. But, sometimes it doesn\'t turn out that way. Glad it didn\'t turn out that way for Hermione in this fic!
Well written, and you made my jaw drop. That takes a LOT. VERY cool!
Great storyline, well done, and I look forward to reading more of your stuff. Well done!
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March 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I loved this at the Restricted Section, but I always enjoy re-reading it.
So very hot, and so very naughty! Quite delicious. I remain a devoted fan.
So very hot, and so very naughty! Quite delicious. I remain a devoted fan.
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March 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
THis is very good, i have seen it before... i hope you\'re planning on writting more to this...PLEASE!
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February 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love your stuff, PBG. This is my favorite. What can I say other than you're one of my most favorite authors of HP fanfic and I hope you never change. From one Gryffindor groupie to another.
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February 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
really good, I love Fred/Hermione stories :) I hope you decide to continue this