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for Relieving the Tension

by PBG

schedule June 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!!
person ETC
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No Fear of Flying here! I\'m a new fan and love that you mix up the characters -- yeah, everyone does SS/HG, etc... but I\'ll take a fresh, hot Fred and/or George story any day! Thanks...
person Caroline
schedule March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just loved it. Lovely writen.
person Samantha
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is what converted me to the wonderful world of FW/HG \'shipping. It\'s incredibly well written. You make the relationship between Hermione and Fred very natural and in-character, which is something I look for in a fic. I *love* the second chapter, when Angelina opens the door on them. Hilarious!

I\'m looking forward to more FW/HG fic! ;-)
person Morrison
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHHHH YEAH! that was definatly hott
person Shot of Tequila
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, very incredible. The characterization, the plot, the sex scenes, all very well-written and combined with amusement. Loved it; I'll try and read your other works soon.
person Shot of Tequila
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I'll come back for the second chapter. Go Fred/Hermione!
person WickedFaith
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OI! She gets EVERYONE! Fred is so incredibly HOT! and so is GEORGE seeing that they ARE twins! Btw, you write great!
person AriadneElda
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. Their flying together on the same broom, the part about the discovery fantasy in Hermione\'s dorm, and the last part in the Forbidden Forest under the rain were... well, beautiful, marvellous. I love the twins, and especially Fred (don\'t know why I\'m more fond of him than George, I just am). And I think you made him so much in character. Great job!
person moony_reader
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What dou mou mean about Jennifer Crusie? I love her books, but I don\'t know which one the \"Discovery Fantasy\" was used in (unless you mean \"Faking It\" and the closet scene??). Have you read her latest book \"Bet Me\"? I read the entire book last night and it\'s amazing!! But it\'s also kinda funny, but I got the feeling that she reads HP fan fics... because her main character is named Minerva, there\'s a adolescent boy in it named Harry who wears glasses and has floppy hair, and she uses the word \"snarky\" which I have really only heard used to describe Snape. What do you think? Please post a response somewhere... either in your reviews or as an author\'s note. I\'m interested in hearing what you think.

BTW, kudos on a great story!! I liked you firstly chose to do an unusual pairing (HG/FW), but I also liked that you didn\'t make it a love story. They had wonderful sex with each other, but they still remained friends. And you did a good job of making Hermione still herself. She was vulnerable of about flying and her sexual turn-ons, but she was still her smart, overachieving, slightly pissed-off self. Good job!!!