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for When Time Stands Still

by SantiMonreal

person steph
schedule July 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this is a really beautifully written chapter. I love this story!!! When are you going to update??!! Soon I hope.
person Odessa
schedule July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh please. please update soon!
person Sandi
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is really amazing. The emotional level is very real. Don\'t worry you are doing a fine job with Hermione. I realize that this is an adult forum, but i really like how this bes been unsmutty. i\'m really not into plotless sex. I\'m here for the angsty violent stuff. this is a very nice change. It gives a cathartic melancoly that is very, well, nice. i can\'t wait for you to update.
person Sliver
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Santi,

It seems you keep getting better and better! I enjoyed the last chapter, especially the scenes with Ron and Ginny. Ya he liedo esto historia en fanfiction.net, pero todavia no he visto la quinta parte de la historia, por que? no quieres a s a continuar alla?

Anyway, I can\'t wait to hear what happens next. My choices for a good read have significantly decreased, with SchuylerD leaving. I think it nice of you to dedicate this chapter to her.


Sliver
person Roxane
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello! Credible threesomes must be very hard to write, and you are doing a wonderful job. It\'s not superficial, it\'s not just about sex; they love and need each other. The storm scenes were absolutely beautiful. Keep up the good work and don\'t forget to keep me posted on your updates! Cheers!
person HPfreak18
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating regularly and I\'ll be sure to check out her site. Great job on this chapter, you are really good at expressing the emotional side of things from these three!!
person Macy Gray
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Deep.The scene with Ron and Ginny was nicely done. I\'m always impressed by the writing. And I just can\'t love this trio! ^_^
person steph
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please keep this up. Ch. 5 was my favorite. You\'ve got talent girl...
person Angelic_Devil
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Aww...I totally love this story. Its comming along nicely, you have true talent. Update soon!
Love ya,
Angelic_Devil
person Archchancellor
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.

I loved the Ron and Ginny stuff that was so sad, but sweet.