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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
p.s. sorry for calling you a girl
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter! Very hot... Keep up the good work!
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...it\'s good! I likeso fso far,not cheezy at all! So, when\'s the next update? Soon I hope! Keep up the good work!
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July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story is one of the bes i have read i hope you can write more very soon! I like the sense of magic around them it is a great feeling!
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July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good. I\'m really glad you take the time to have your stories edited, and I believe your are doing a wonderous job. Your imagery is incredible.
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July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry up with the next chapter! I\'m just standing on hairs, waiting for this. I think you\'re good author. You like writing, ne?
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July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
most interesting story. I enjoy the deep thoughts and reflections of the three young people coming of age in a world filled with uncertainity and struggle. It is most poignant at times and poetic at others.
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July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wxcellent stuff. Would I be right in thinking that was your first go at writing smut? Because that was very well done.
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July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Santi,
This was good! When are you going to update, Seriously, I need to read the rest of this story. You left me hanging on
\"El Texto Prohibido\". I\'m getting anxious, I need to know what the rest of the summer holds for them.
Sliver
This was good! When are you going to update, Seriously, I need to read the rest of this story. You left me hanging on
\"El Texto Prohibido\". I\'m getting anxious, I need to know what the rest of the summer holds for them.
Sliver
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What can I say except...DAMN, that was hot! I see the action is starting to heat up between the trio...well, in their dreams anyway. Look forward to the next chapter.*Fans self*