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August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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August 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I thought this chapter explained alot thanks for writeing me back it really shows that you appriciate your readers and i like that also please keep wing ing i love this story!!!!!!!!!
again i really do like how you write back to people!
again i really do like how you write back to people!
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August 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Santi,
This chapter was funny! At least I think it is. It is also wierd, to some extent. Are you going to get them together in the next chapter? I can\'t wait to find out. Update soon!
This chapter was funny! At least I think it is. It is also wierd, to some extent. Are you going to get them together in the next chapter? I can\'t wait to find out. Update soon!
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August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have made me blush with that comment to myself (red cheeks) but thank you!
You worried about your story being too smutty, not in the least bit! Smut (aka a touch of porn and/or sexual relations) sometimes takes on a meaning that is not very complimentary. Do not get me wrong I love a good smutty romp, however your story is so touching, exploring the desires of these three young people with reality and magic. Though I may sense a bit more coming in the area of the exploration to the point of mayhaps consumation I do not equate it with smut, but with natural, sweet coming of age.
Excellent.
You worried about your story being too smutty, not in the least bit! Smut (aka a touch of porn and/or sexual relations) sometimes takes on a meaning that is not very complimentary. Do not get me wrong I love a good smutty romp, however your story is so touching, exploring the desires of these three young people with reality and magic. Though I may sense a bit more coming in the area of the exploration to the point of mayhaps consumation I do not equate it with smut, but with natural, sweet coming of age.
Excellent.
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Weird chapter indeed, but necessary to the plot. While your story is obviously a threesome, I\'ve noticed that there are onlyry/Hermione and Ron/Hermione moments. I was wondering if there would be any Ron/Harry moments. I mean, I know they don\'t believe themselves to be gay, but they still love each other, so it would add some depth to the relationship. But if you\'re not comfortable writing slash, by all means, don\'t. Keep up the wonderful work! Cheers!
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Who\'d ever thought a threesome fanfic would strangely romantic? Now the Grangers are asking about Harry? Is Harry going to to stay with the Granger\'s for the summer? Oh, please say yes!! ^^
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i like this chapter in the fact that they are very real-feeling situations...hermione\'s feelings toward the lust spell seamed very real indeed.
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this was a pretty good chapter and i can\'t wait for more, but don\'t drop your classes unless your positive you will fail them otherwise. Its a big waste of money and if its just because they are suckie I tell ya they\'re just going to suck more in a long semester. I\'m taking a completely pointless class right now, and it suck; it would horrible to have to take it for 16 weeks instead of five.
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July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven\'t reviewed, I have been gone so no internet for me. Great job on the last two chapters and I am looking foward to the next!
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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is great, the \"scene\" was great, you can update whenever your heart desires. The writing about the spell book was phenomenal. Keep it up man...