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for Slytherin & Gold

by GlindaTrisstt

person Jesss
schedule August 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! lol Man...Viviane is pregnaunt with twins and what else? Is Remus going to be a suicide? let\'s see then...
person GadoTheLion
schedule August 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
where are the next chapters? i have been looking and wondering just checking!

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Gado The Lion Almighty
person Jessica
schedule August 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! this is a really good story! can\'t wait till yyou update soon!
person GadoTheLion
schedule August 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well now this is odd she now has the powers to control animal pheremones and make plants grow like crazy!............she would be a hit at parties!...... i would sat a pot plant by her and be like,\"viv you look tired...Would you like to lay down?\"........... talking about bank money there.................. anywho....... i was about to say before i went off on a tangent.....................oh ok well onto my review... i think the new twist and the new plot pick up is kinda........... amazing plz keep thing interesting...........

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person Tinka
schedule July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
really great!!! Really well-rounded. I like how you have a story arc for all the characters. Fred and George at the ball were right on target - \"I don\'t know what it\'s about, but sure I\'m willing to help\" attitude. Harry and Ginny - perfect - reminds me of my experiences lo those many years ago. I like the nice long chapters - I have read some other stories so short that you don\'t even have to scroll down to read the whole chapter - no fun! And the erotocism, much nicer descriptions than the usual \"bang, bang, bang, uunnngh\" posts. Please write more! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!
person RickyRoo
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is incredible! The dream interpretation is very well done, although I think you repeated yourself a bit too much when switching points of view. A new point of view should introduce a new personal interpretaiton, but that\'s just me. I\'m loving this story.
person jenn
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What a great story!! I think this is one of the best that I have read here. The story is beautifully written and the character dialouge is outstanding. Don\'t get discouraged by the amount of reviews. I think that sometimes people just enjoy the reading and dont think about the author\'s need to know what they thought. I think it is absolutly wonderful. And about your concern over the lenght of the chapters, don\'t shorten them. I love to read chapters with substance. Short little piddley chapters just dont do it for me, or alot of readers. Please finish this story. I cannot wait to see how it all turns out!
person Anon
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story. I like the idea of Viviane being a Nymph and having those powers.

I would have enjoyed it even more, though, if you learned the difference between \"your\" and \"you\'re\" and how to spell \"definitely.\" Please get a beta reader!
person GadoTheLion
schedule July 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter i cant wait to read more i think i am starting to get the feel that hogwarts is all about the sex though....................... KICK ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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person Yanna
schedule July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. First rate. Good lord, I don\'t think I have enough kind words in my vocabulary for this story. Beautiful... Love, danger, romance, all of it. Love this stor Yan