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Hi!
You said in the last chapter that you plan to go on with this fic. But it is a long time since you uploaded a story or chapter her. I hope you are still writing and that some day you will add new chapters to this story. I really love this story. So if you ever upload a new chapter please inform me. Bye Sunny

please finish this story

I\'ve really been enjoying your story Slytherin & Gold. Your writing style and characterization is excellent.
I hope to see more chapters soon.

Ok- Every time I read a new story of yours I say Oh Oh- THIS is my new favorite.... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update! This is my fav Ss/OC pairing yet! And I need to find out what happens to the babies.. and Harry... and the Remus and the new teacher!

Still liking the story a lot. The bit about the chaste tree was well researched. I know a bit about herbology, as it were, and real information (where possible) really adds to the story\'s credibility. Small criticism: there are a huge number of typos and a smaller, but noticeable, number of errors in grammar or form. I know you said one of the later chapters was un-beta\'d but still... Please don\'t be offended. I really like the story (which is why I\'ve gotten this far) but reading copy with mistakes like that make my left brain want to seize ;)

I am so sorry for your loss. Real life has a way of sneaking into fiction, doesn\'t it. I hope you are well or at least, pointing in that direction.

Hello,

Sorry it\'s taken me so long to get over here from Occlumency. Thanks for the link to the story here. You know I love it, especially now that Remus is more involved. What is it about Sev and Mooney that make the girls so wild?!

Hi, just finished reading all the chapters. It's a good storyline, and as with your other stories, I do like your original characters.

I'm really glad you dropped the narrative repetition through alternate viewpoints that you'd done in the first few chapters. It was distracting, and detracted from the quality of the story. Truly, unless you're doing something highly Rashomon-esque, where the course of the action changes substantially depending on who's telling the story, it's just unnecessary. In general, if you ever do a serious rewrite on this story, I would just go from a third-person neutral standpoint, and let the narrative guide the reader to determine who's in the action at the moment. Section headings with the POV character are superfluous to a werittritten story.

This one's not as good as The Rules of Engagement, but it's a very likeable story.

Great story so far Glinda, can\'t wait to see what happens!

Well, I must say you\'ve done it again. So many wonderful stories, it\'s no wonder you can\'t update them all as much as I\'d like for you to. I really like this Snape by the way. Some may think he\'s out of character, but not me. Love has a way of completely changing a person and I like it a lot! This is a great story...Please don\'t give up on it.

Kathy