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for Puppet on a string

by obsidiara

person Crystal
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I was wondering if I could find your stories anywhere else besides adultfanfiction.net. I thought you'd written a sequel to this story, but I can't find it. Maybe you could email it to me.

Thanks
Crystal
person dedmun
schedule April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this depiction of harry just makes me wanna bash him on the head with a sharp rock repeatedly! the nerve of that jerk! argh!!!! anyway, if you like, it would be lovely to see if he actually did change. not that i think draco should forgive him, but i know he will. *trails off into disgruntled mumbles* ron that a$$
person CutMeFREEAndMakeMeFEEL
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your work. I\'m just a sucker for angst. When I read this, it made me cry a little. Keep up with the good angsty stuff! I\'d love it if you made a sequel to this.
person Anon
schedule August 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey that was good, you sh def definately do a sequel. I think poor Draco has suffered enough. I mean the poor guy didn\'t really deserve all that pain that Harry put him through. If you write a sequel let me know. Send me an email if it\'s not too much trouble.
person Anon
schedule July 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Will you be writing a sequel? It would be so cool if you did. Please email me if you do.
person yeah
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
finally a story where we see the harry from OOTP..selfish, clightly cruel . and malfoy may be a pretty boy but he\'s always been weak. (he\'s scared of the dark, remember.) I think the relationship should become more equal as time passes, but for some more time harry should make malfoy pay for all the things he said and did. from trying to get hagrid fired to insinuationg that Cedric deserved to die. COOOOl story. love it.
person Furies
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!I still HATE harry and I hope you update. I would really like to see Draco leave harry or let Harry let draco go (because harry really loves him) and make harry suffer, the bastard. How can harry care? was it not just recently, hell....5 months prior he was getting off on seeing Draco sick. All the raping and beatings. how in the HELL can Draco even think of LOVING him. I know, it\'s that capture and captive thing...Perlly,lly, I think that Draco should stay away from harry for a few years and get his life and confidence and self back into control (like he was before, but nice strong, sure of himself and a lovable wonderful guy i know he can be))....and then have harry and him re-meet and maybe build a new relationship, but of course harry\'s gotta suffer (and alot), where they can be happy and love eachother. I\'m a sap for happy endings, i can\'t help it....but really, can and would draco forgive harry? thanks- I really love your stories...they get my blood going-deanne
person Jaimi
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE ANOTHER PART TO THIS. this is just too good to leave like that. pretty pretty please with sugar on top
person YaoiBoyDemonLover
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ok...I don\'t feel as angry towards Harry anymore. I love this fic! Typically I\'m not into the idea of well...male pregnancy but you made it work...(Don\'t tell my wife I said that lol) Great job, keep it going I can\'t wait to read more!