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for Squeaky Clean

by PBG

person munk55
schedule January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another chapter on the way?
person wes
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is excellent very sensually written there are not enough stories with this level of sensuality in them most are so crudely written that they become laughable your by contrast is very well done
person Spike of Doom
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Fucking sweet lemon!! omg one of the best and ive read alot lol!!! She\'s one of those unique characters so its always fun to see author try and use different chars than the norm! im glad you did and im hoping for some continuation??? please!!!!!! ^_^
person Mishra
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Simply great.
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very, very good.

If only all the fanfiction writers here could write this well. Nicely done. I\'d ask for a sequal, but I don\'t really see where you could go from here. Instead, I\'ll just ask that you keep writing stories.
person Anon
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome.

Please keep writing.
person SpikyAngel
schedule October 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow incredible, first alicia harry fic ive read and the way you\'ve presented it... i\'m converted!
person Achilles
schedule July 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I hope you put at least one more chapter to this. I really like the first chapter.
person r. duck
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
now that is what i call a story. truly, um, inspiring. using alicia was a great touch. she\'s not a huge character and showing how liberal she is was a nice touch. my only complaint, because she isn\'t a character we know a lot of i couldn\'t really picture her. what does she look like? anyway, i really enjoyed the story.
person Alaxius de Draconia
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t say I\'d\'ve thought of this pairing, but I\'ve no complaints. In fact, I love this story. You decriptiveness is superb. Keep up the good work!