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for Comfort

by shelia

person Talene
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting concept...this new spell. I like the story! Poor Remus deserves some happiness and cheer as well. I pray you\'ll have it end happily. I think it is a wonderful story! Inspiring as well. May I use your Soul-Bonding l inl in a story of mine if I give you credit for it? Pleeeze!
person estrilda
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Amazing! Well written, innovative, exciting. All I can say is I hope you are planning to update often with long beautiful chapters.
person jenbachand
schedule August 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story. It\'s a great & interesting & lovely plot. Please update soon. I\'m guessing she will be feeling much stronger feelings for him now that she knows his pain. Maybe a research subject for her to cure him or reverse the curse.

Jen :)
person LilyRose
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please keep going with this story! It is really well written and an absolute dream to read! No strange spelling mistakes or grammar mix-ups. At the risk of sounding like an English teacher, excellent punctuation, spelling and grammar! There, thats the \'teachery\' bit out of the way! I love it when i find a story when i can read without constantly correcting things in my head! Please add some more, otherwise i will experience severe withdrawal symptoms! You dont wanna be near me when i have withdrawal symptoms! Btw, I think Gra Grammy\'s All-Cure or whatever it\'s called sounds like an excellent idea- someone invent it NOW!
person LilyRose
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
PS. I forgot to say- i LOVE HG/RL!
person Corazon
schedule August 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I have been reading this, but I
think this is my first review for this story.
Lovely, although I love your work and your way with
Remus. I hope you continue because I
am wanting to see these two together.
(BUT ONLY IN THIS STORY! I HAVE PLANS
FOR HERMIONE WITH SEVERUS IN ANOTHER
STORY!) *WINK!!!*

Great chapter Andrian!

Hugs,
Corazon
person Odessa
schedule August 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Interesting, very interesting...
person Liah
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wonderful, just wonderful!!! this is the first fic based on ootp. and i was impresseed. i loved this...and what is going to happen next??? i want to read the next chapter asap:):):):) so...get on writong..:P
person GrrArrg
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start, very original idea and the first story I\'ve found based round Order of the pheonix. I can\'t wait to see what happens next!!
GrrArrg
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I hope you update soon! WHat a great plot device between Hermione and Remus. But I wonder if he will be able to stay away for long...
*ponders*

UPdate soon =)
KE