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Oh. My. God. Each chapter is better than the last! Your story and characters (and lemons, I might add!) are terrific, and I look forward to updates. Know what you mean about reviews - the relatively small number can get frustrating if you look at it as a straight comparison to other character combination preferences. I agree, though, with the others who said that since not as many people follow the OC\'s, numbers become a reflection of audience size, not of quality. You have the latter nailed! I look forward to your updates whenever you have a chance to do them. Thank you, by the way, for all your support of my story too - your comments have been so, so, so appreciated.

Best wishes,
R.

I absolutely love this piece! It\'s so rare that you see really good OC fiction, and you\'ve certainly accomplished it here. I love the characters, and I think the time period it\'s set in is genius, as Snape\'s younger in much easier to think of him in a relationship with a student - I am still a little baffled as to why Valora\'s in Slytherin when she seems to altruistic most of the tiI knI know you\'ve worked an angle on \"she\'s there because she\'s Snape\'s soul mate\" which is charming, but I just think the sorting hat must have seen something at least a little wily about her - but I think her less angelic portions are really starting to come out in the last chapters. Fabulous job!

I think you are doing a lovely job with this wonderful story and I always look forward to an update. As for the lack of reviews, I note that you have just over 2000 hits and this would be your 20th review meaning you are averaging about one percent reviews on your hits. I\'d say it\'s pretty damn good! SS/OCs don\'t have as large a following as SS/HG.

Anyhow, please don\'t become discouraged, you are an excellent writer and fine storyteller!

April

Hey, don\'t be depressed about the few reviews you\'ve received. It\'s a great story and I love it!

Update soon, I\'m almost eating my shoe now to do something in the meantime. (wink)

Maddy

I\'d just like to say how nice it is to read another of your chapters - this piece was my little introduction to aff and I hold great sentiment in it; fabulous characters and plot weaving. I\'m very happy with where you\'ve taken it so far and have no \"suggestions\" as you\'re more than capable of writing the *good stuff* to come, I\'m sure. Thanks for your words.

This story is simply the best I\'ve ever read on an amature fiction site. A well developed original character, and other characters that actually STAY in character; long chapters that give plenty of time for development, and well written romance. Real romance, not just pointless smut! An excellent effort so far; please complete!

0Glinda! It is a beautiful tale and I have been waiting anxiously for weeks for this update! Please sweetie.....don\'t stop writing it! Have you seen mine? An Exchange? I absolutely ADORE your writing so please don\'t stop!

Loving your story! Really nice dance between temptation and resistance of the forbidden. Great detail work - it really brings the characters to life (boring hist. of magic lesson, religious ritual, baby Ronny & Ginny, etc.) And - of course - smokin\' hot Severus! :-D Can\'t wait to see your updates.

Best wishes,
R.

WOW! I\'m loving this fic, speacilly because it remind\'s me of Alan Rickman (yes, I worship him,uhh that voice!!!)
Please update soon!
I can\'t wait!!

Hey girl, you need to update this amazing story! I am really enjoying it. You are a damn good writer! Keep up the great work gf!

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