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for Finding It All

by carlnz

schedule June 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Those two are adorable.
person Anon
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Lisa1352
schedule May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was great !!!! I really enjoy this story.
person hia
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
r u gay?? 'cuz if u r lets fuck somtime
person char
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome.
person catlove
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that\'s lovely. I really liked that final scene and the deal they make. Plus slamming the door when Ron was sleeping and other goodies that made it seem to fit. Not that the smut was bad or anything ;)
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is FABULOUS!!! I like the end very much;-) Deb >^..^<
person some
schedule July 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
GOOD STORY!!!! I REALLY LIKE IT!!
person SchuylerD
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I like your style and voice -- unique! The laughing and fumbling was cute and realistic -- I got great images of each scene in my mind. your descrons ons were spot on. I love it when fics have a personality all their own and just spring right to life as I begin reading them. This one practically jumps off the page. Well done! This one was a real keeper.
person Steph
schedule July 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was beautiful, lemon merangue(spelled wrong?) goodness! i loved the end, very sweet.