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for Honor Thy Father

by dementedpixie

person IndigoPear
schedule July 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey, you have an interesting start to a Draco/hermione fic. keep it up! it\'s really angsty and dirty so far. now get some plot started. You have the beginnings of a good fic.
person Jayme
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Heh heh. Good so far. Can\'t wait for Draco to get revenge! Poor Draco...I have a very big soft spot for him....
person TeaRoses
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was a little squeamish at first about it but I k yok you set the scene for hatred and revenge well. And Hermione is a good person to get involved. It\'s not a pairing I usually read but for the sake of this fic I may start to like it.
person Bree
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t really say that the story is good so far because what exactly is good about dear sexy Draco getting raped by his father? Except for the fact that this IS adultfanfiction, and nothing less is expected. I can say though that the writing is excellent, especially since I believe you mentioned that this is your first fanfic, and the storyline is great. I want to read more and I hope that you plan on keeping the story updated because the best part has got to be when Draco and Hermione get together, and of course when the revenge is served. Thanks!
person Catherine
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice begining...i dont read incest but since its not concensual i decided it would be ok, it was good, please put more up soon:P Yes it was sick and twisted but as a writer of dark i kni know how it is so it was good nether the less...:P
person IckiVicki
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Twisted! Can\'t wait for Draco to get revenge. And for Hermione to help him. ^_~