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for Room of Requirement

by AnaNg

person Catherine
schedule July 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow nice chapter:) You obviously know abit about pregancy and such...oh and naming the baby Sirus...god thats hallerious....Severus hates Sirus...so cute:) Hehe...:) Mean cliffy man...not cool!
person pixi
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE!
person Catherine
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OHHH What am EVIL cfliffy!!!!!!!!! Oh you must update ohhh is she going to die...she better not...my emotions are hard to keep in check!!! Ohh please let them be ok...

Catherine
person Potions Mistress
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I hope Hermione will be okay!! This is great! Update soon! What name does she have picked out?
person Potions Mistress
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I laughed out loud about Severus and the mouse thing! It was so funny. I love this story, and it\'s great how you update so often! Keep it up! Update soon!
person levans
schedule July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Like it. No fight aye? Hope it all turns out! Nice visuals. I have noticed a few his, him or her mixed up, but when your punding \'em out hard, what can you expect. Good story line... I especially liked the pictures around the great hall, but do you really think that old Dumbledore would be so***forgiving*** after all, when you shag in a public place, the odds are, someone is going to see you. I think my headmaster would have burst an aeorta.
Keep him, er, I mean it, cumming(Pun definitely intended!)
P.S. All grossness aside, I would like to see him pop his rocks all over her face and hair(vulgarity aside, it is a great visual description)
person Potions Mistress
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I must say... I love your smut scenes. Poor Severus, he had to wait until she was finished eating to ravage her, and then he had to bathe her. How sad. I can\'t wait to hear what people are saying about their little show in the Great Hall. Update soon
person Potions Mistress
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione!! And Severus! Kill Draco and Pansy!!!!!!!! I mean it! Just use one little curse. Here, i\'ll do it for you *raises wand* \"Avada Kadavra!\" *green light shoots out of wand* . There. All finished. Update soon! I love your story!
person TeaRoses
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is cute! But should people really use a vibrator during pregnancy? (I\'m just teasing, really, it\'s magic after all so why not?) I thought I would die laughing when they got caught by Harry. I definitely want to read the rest.
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Once again - I enjoyed it! *purrs* Update soon!!!! I wanna know what happens!

Thanks
Karena Elizabeth