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December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't possibly believe you wasted time and bandwith by posting this stinking pile of crap. An incident in Potion? OK, I'll buy that. No one at Hogwarts is able to mend a sexchange? Okay - though my suspension of of incredulity just pulled a muscle from overstretching. Harry gay? Well -whatever rocks your boat.
But HOT SEXY DRACO MALFOY IMMEDIATELY PUTTING ASIDE HIS RACIST SLUR AND START BEING NICE just because Harry's penis is removed from the scene? Go jump in a cement mixer.
But HOT SEXY DRACO MALFOY IMMEDIATELY PUTTING ASIDE HIS RACIST SLUR AND START BEING NICE just because Harry's penis is removed from the scene? Go jump in a cement mixer.
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolutly wonderful! I can\'t wait for you next update.
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! the story was wonderful. Please,i want more harry/draco lovin.
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October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here's a constructive criticism hun. You are, as you said yourself, not good in writing sex scenes at all, to be honest. For a long tslasslasher, this is trully not nearly enough of a smut. You ought to read more of that, I suggest. On the other hand, I'm hooked on the plot. There's much to be learned in writing style, likewise in spelling and grammer but the plot is, while not too original, very good. The turns and twists that every now and then you show are pretty effective. And you have captured the characterization of each characater *so* well that it is what sustains the otherwise simple story. In that account, you have made a brilliant job. Congratulations, and hope you continue with the fic. Am looking forward to further chapters!
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July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
rtu
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June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved this :)
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whens ur next update
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
when is the next chapter comin gout
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I read this story for the frist time six months ago... I found it very good and re-read it, I was hoping it would have been updated by now, and I was wondering when are you going to update? I hope you do soon, and I think It\'ll be worth it, after all it\'s a very good fic. Hope you update REALLY soon, since I\', desperate. *Sighs*
PS: by the way in the sex scene on chapter 12 there is a mistake, I thought you might want to check that out. It is about Harry entering Draco, but you wrote that Draco prepared Harry, I just thought you ought to know.
Thanks for your attention, and hope this fics keeps getting more hits.
PS: by the way in the sex scene on chapter 12 there is a mistake, I thought you might want to check that out. It is about Harry entering Draco, but you wrote that Draco prepared Harry, I just thought you ought to know.
Thanks for your attention, and hope this fics keeps getting more hits.
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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