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for Troubled Love

by Cherish

person Peter
schedule July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Nice story, good plot. Do write more, I\'m in suspense.
person KamirineGoddess
schedule July 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story is nice! Update really soon, I can\'t wait!
person Mod
schedule July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was cute and a differant kinda slash story. What will happen when he changes back? did Draco like him before? It seemed like it! will Ron and hermoine confess? I hope so! ( Can you tell i love asking the cliffhanger questions) I\'ll Stay tuned for more updates!!!!!!
person Daphne
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Two words I LOVED
Please post the new chapters soon
person Krisam
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it....the only thing i could recommend is (besides checking spelling before you post) is more explist sex scenes...more graphics, draco\'s dick was long, thick and throbbing, harry was scarcly thinking about how his was almost as big, but then it reoccured to him that he was this sexy girl...etc...things like that only much more graphic*wink wink* please make it continue for many more chapters and i was just thinking maybe you could make something happen where harry didn\'t want to change back into a boy again, and therefore \"accidentally\" knocks over the cauldron that holds the potion to turn him back...Harry and Draco get married and have babies and so on and so forth, many more sex scenes...get gigantic manor of their own and have hott sex in every pole wle way in ever single room in the manor...get the idea...:D

please update A.S.A.P...

Kristen and Sam
person Ralna
schedule July 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hi there!

I like your story very much. it\'s really sweet. and I like the idea of changing harry into a girl. well done, really!

I hope you hurry with the next chapter.

bye, Ralna

person RaynieceMalfoy
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey.
I love this story. It\'s cute. I hope you update real soon.
Is this gonna turn into mpreg b/c if it is I\'m gonna jump up and down.
I LOVE MPREG STORIES. *smirks *

Well C-Ya,

Love Ray ~ LATER DAYZ~
person RaynieceMalfoy
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh
I almost forgot if it\'s not to much trouble could you e-mail me when you update.
I really do like this story ( although I do despise straight stories).
Soon enough it will be slash. ^-^

Well C-Ya ,

Love, Ray
P.S. Plz E-mail me if you get a chance.

~LATER DAYZ~
person Furies
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the update. i love this story. You are such a great writer. i can\'t wait for more harry and draco. I really liked the way after they made love and draco wanted harry to stay....oh and the possibility of harry becoming pregnant?!?!?!?!? Oh please, I hope so!!! update soon. thanks-deanne
person Jayme
schedule July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This was really good! A great angle for a story. One thing, you should get someone to beta your fics. There are quite a few spelling/grammer mistakes, which can be a turn-off. :) But keep it up, I can\'t wait to read the rest!