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for Troubled Love

by Cherish

person Danine
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cute story, keep going!
person Morning Coffee
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ough, Harry-the-girl meeting his, eh, future in-laws?
no other than the Malfoys, hmph..!

well, somehow i\'d like to think that the Malfoys, specially the males, are highly protective of who they call their \'own\'.
since Harry is the partner of his precious heir, well, i\'m sure they\'re keen to treat him as such, plus all the pomp & ceremonies.. X)
person Fucker
schedule July 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MORE!
person mikochef22
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is so good!! I think I know why Harry can\'t see the castle clearly...YET! and I cant wait to find out if im right, please update soon. I love this! Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
person Karena Elizabeth
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WooHoo! A blow job in the hallway! Hot Damn!

Great chapter - I wanna know what happens though... And draco didn\'t confirm he wasn\'t gay, so does that mean he is or is bi? UPdate soon please!
Karena Eliazabeth
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
U SUCK! UR STORY SUCKS!
HP/DM SLASH ALL THA WAY! NO GIRLHARRY!
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a bit.
But the concept of turning Harry into a girl isn\'t good.
I don\'t like it.
And I think it\'s just weird and unrealistic.
Blegh.
person cutie_draco84
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay, you finally had a chance to update, please write more. Quick question : Did Harry see the castle in mists because he was in a female form, therefore not his true self?
Thanks 4 the posting, can\'t wait for more
person Sam
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story, and i hope you keep writing it...maybe harry doesn\'t want to change back and they stay together forever...that kind of mushy thing, only with lots more sex...
person Margi!
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was good hmmm diffrnet why diffrnet and i am not good at grammer eather so welcome to the clud(insider) so..... keep on writting and stay in school if your still in it?