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for Shadows of Truth

by Keara

person Lisa
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLZ update soon. i am hooked on this story!! u are doing a very good job of it. i look forward to the next chapter.
person Priss368
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Draco will be o.k.! I bet those stupid slytherins will be in for a shock when they get theirs! They should be expelled! (after Harry gets them back!). He could have the perfect opportunity in class the next day. I bet the offending students will try to be boastful in classes the next day. Then, Harry will make them sorry! I\'m also glad the baby is o.k. & that the blindness is only temporary. Can\'t wait to read more! Priss
person ura
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM

This story is great! I very very like it. Keep writing!
person Harley
schedule October 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooo! fix em fix em fix em, quick!!! I love the story - i love protective Harry especially when hes protecting D, it, its just so darn cute. Poor Draco, the kid just can't catch a break... oh i hope you can fix his eyesight, it gives me the wiggins to think about it. can't wait till the next chapter. :-)
person thrnbrooke
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh hav have to hurry with chapter 15! I'm dying to know what happened! Is the baby okay? Draco? What does Harry do? Oh I bet Hermione feels soo bad! She shouldn't have left him! More!
person Sky
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no, please don't stop here! What about the baby? And will Draco be able to see again?
person fanfictionfanatic
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just ran across your story and I have really enjoyed it. I love Draco stories and Draco/Harry is one of my favorite pairings. The story is well written and contains very good characterizations. I love the relationship you have developed between Draco and Harry as well as the concepts of acceptance of Draco by the Grifs and the contempt shown him by the the Slyths. I hope the baby has survived this latest ordeal. And poor Draco, he has really suffered physically throughout the story. I am looking forward to reading more.
person AJ
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the fic but your chapters are too damn short. Make them longer, and with more detial in whats actually happening to the people. Though I do intend to keep reading and reviewing so don't worry bout losing a reader just you know make it better.

AJ
person Priss368
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, that was a short chappie! I'm glad Draco's alive. I hope the baby is too. I also hope that those students who attacked him get sent to Azkaban! They deserve it for assault & the use of an Unforgivable! Yay for Crabbe & Goyle being nicer than expected! Please update soon! Priss
person dedmun
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
evil stinkin' writer! how DARE you end the chapter like this?!?! stinkin' cliffhanger.

anyway, loved this chapter. can't wait to find out about harry. hope he gives hermione the freakin' third degree. what an idiot! keep up the great and post again REALLY soon!!