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Whoa, very angsty. Good work, we\'re waiting for the next few chapters.
Thanks,
~Kate~

Oh man, I can just see Snape dragging his weak behind out of that hospital bed and stumbling to join the fight. I wonder if he believed or at least second-guessed any of what \"dogboy\" told him about Hermione/Laura? I guess you\'ll let us know. :)

I haven`t expected you are able to write such a dark and mhapthapter-Snape had been going to his Hell-very expressive picture of poor soul-tormented by his own demons-Sirius,James and females he`s been attached.Honestly,I`m very pleased with this part of the story-really delightful in reading.
I think Snape subconsciously suspected Laura could be Hermiona yet he doesn`t want to accept that possibility because of consequences following the forbidden teacher-student relationship.
I have to admit that the first thing I do every time I`m surfing in Internet is checking if you had updated.
I love your fic!Regards.L.A.

This is great. Please keep up the good work.

That was so... descriptive. But wonderful! What on earth was it that woke Snape up like that?

Another amazing chapter, April, thanks. The force was a great idea, as was the interludes and tactful way you told us what Voldemort did to Snape. Lyrical language and great characterisations. Hmm, how is Hermione going to reveal herself. As Laura I mean ;) Will she be helping Snape recover?

WOW very powerful indeed! I am speechless at the moment...thank you.

Lovely,arousing and sweet yet dark and painful as well.Such an impressive work-I`m utterly enthralled withr imr imagination-their resemblances of last appointment mixed with the most evil scene you`ve ever written-admirably indeed!I`m dying of impatience and curiosity-waiting for more-next chapter,please!With love-L.A.

I really, realike ike this....it\'s just that it gets harder and harder to read knowing that she is continuing the deception. A relationship built on lies does not a relationship make, you know? Please don\'t take this as a flame. I do enjoy this story...its just that I open each new chapter hoping that she confesses, and yet as another reviewer commented, she keeps digging herself deeper and deeper. Sigh.

Say, it\'s nice to know I\'m needed. Or just wanted, for that matter. :o)
Lots and lots of situational tension is good, so keep building it up!
Love,
~Kate~